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for Ranger Ron

by AlishaV

schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Hilarious! Thanks for sharing that. The ending was just too funny.

Happy writing!

person mangatake
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:D Love the ending.
person WiseDraco
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG I laughed so hard. That was awesome.
person Lexi
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rofl, this is hilarious. I really really dig the last line.

Somehow, I'm hoping to see more out of this. ;)
person myladymystere
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a sexy little story with a great surprise ending. loved it
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really well written with a hilarious ending.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rotflmao! Talk about a surprise ending! *snickers*
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, nifty story. The idea of a closeted kid subconciously lusting after his favorite childhood superhero is refreshingly original and delightfuly plausible. =P But the ending kept me from taking the whole thing too seriously, and gave me a giggle besides. (And reminded me of something that happened to a friend of mine a little while ago... xD)

Well done. =D
person Kip
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! And a wonderful twist in the plot at the end! Whatta finish!!! 'Purr
person DarkKat
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0.0; ....omg....just..o..m..g....

hahaha that was great

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