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for The Broken Rose

by morgansbane

person gws234
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I strongly suggest getting a beta reader to go over this with you. Right now, this isn't too great, but if you keep practicing you'll get better. Don't give up.
person lenalia
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story to read, almost makes one wonder what all is behind it