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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I strongly suggest getting a beta reader to go over this with you. Right now, this isn't too great, but if you keep practicing you'll get better. Don't give up.
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story to read, almost makes one wonder what all is behind it