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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far and am impatient for more. I can't wait to know what will happen next for the King to have his little Pet~ I will be anxiously waiting.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! It's like 3 in the morning so I'm not up for a particularly long review, I just wanted to ask you to please not use the "HEY LET ME SHOW YOU MY LIBRARY"
"OMG YOU HAVE A LIBRARY? YOU MUST BE A GOOD PERSON DESPITE PRIOR EVIDENCE TO THE CONTRARY, TAKE ME NOW"
cliché, because it's really overdone, and I find it kind of ridiculous. But yeah, I really like this so far!
"OMG YOU HAVE A LIBRARY? YOU MUST BE A GOOD PERSON DESPITE PRIOR EVIDENCE TO THE CONTRARY, TAKE ME NOW"
cliché, because it's really overdone, and I find it kind of ridiculous. But yeah, I really like this so far!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy... wow. when i first read the summary i thought that this would be another "bad seme kidnaps a poor uke" fic that, while might be enjoyable, wouldn't probably be too original.
and WHAM! it turnes out it's one of the best original fics i've read. well, at least a beginning of one. looks like the saying "the devil is in the details" is true. because while the setting and the basic plotline is far from real-life-like, the characters' behaviors are damn believable! well, ok, i've no idea how an average storm god behaves, but the one you portrayed does it well enough to seem real (in the "god-like" sense) and a bit likable even. the fact that he is not a sadistic bastard that goes off on seeing others crumble under his power (at least in a purely sexual way) is always a plus. that he is a bit dense (he can't tell why his "pet" is frighened of him!) is actually a bit endearing :P and he actually listens to a voice of reason! and as much as he sucks for being the kidnapper i can give it to him - alex's life was miserable ^^; he will probably benefit from the change, in the future, if they develop some emotional bond between each other.
as for alex - i believe this is the first fic in which the basic truth is acknowledged: a rape is a rape and physical response from the victim IS NOT a sign that they want it. i'm used to reading otherwise and i know to treat it with a wink and "it's a fiction, it's ll for fun" attitude, hell, many times i immensly enjoy a fic with a scene or two (or more) like that. But always, in the back of my mind, i know it doesn't happen like that. and you decided to explore it. you want to have a "pet" that wants you and desires you? work on it, dammit! being a good lay no longer suffices *nods*
and yeah, the lack of obvious "violence", "humiliation" and "abuse" elements is a big "thumbs up" factor too. the "stockholm syndrome" motif is seriously overused sometimes ^^'
i can't forget about your style of writing simply being GOOD. the narration is fluid, the descriptions are clear and the flow of the language is nice to follow.
as a result of all the above mentioned reasons (and a few i'm keeping to myself) this story became one of my favorites ^^ keep up the good work and sorry for the autopsy i basically performed on your baby ^^'
and WHAM! it turnes out it's one of the best original fics i've read. well, at least a beginning of one. looks like the saying "the devil is in the details" is true. because while the setting and the basic plotline is far from real-life-like, the characters' behaviors are damn believable! well, ok, i've no idea how an average storm god behaves, but the one you portrayed does it well enough to seem real (in the "god-like" sense) and a bit likable even. the fact that he is not a sadistic bastard that goes off on seeing others crumble under his power (at least in a purely sexual way) is always a plus. that he is a bit dense (he can't tell why his "pet" is frighened of him!) is actually a bit endearing :P and he actually listens to a voice of reason! and as much as he sucks for being the kidnapper i can give it to him - alex's life was miserable ^^; he will probably benefit from the change, in the future, if they develop some emotional bond between each other.
as for alex - i believe this is the first fic in which the basic truth is acknowledged: a rape is a rape and physical response from the victim IS NOT a sign that they want it. i'm used to reading otherwise and i know to treat it with a wink and "it's a fiction, it's ll for fun" attitude, hell, many times i immensly enjoy a fic with a scene or two (or more) like that. But always, in the back of my mind, i know it doesn't happen like that. and you decided to explore it. you want to have a "pet" that wants you and desires you? work on it, dammit! being a good lay no longer suffices *nods*
and yeah, the lack of obvious "violence", "humiliation" and "abuse" elements is a big "thumbs up" factor too. the "stockholm syndrome" motif is seriously overused sometimes ^^'
i can't forget about your style of writing simply being GOOD. the narration is fluid, the descriptions are clear and the flow of the language is nice to follow.
as a result of all the above mentioned reasons (and a few i'm keeping to myself) this story became one of my favorites ^^ keep up the good work and sorry for the autopsy i basically performed on your baby ^^'
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is great!
I haven't read anything like this before.
The storm king is kinda clueless when it comes to humans isn't he?
It kind of makes me laugh.
I love your writing style, it flows really smoothly and makes the story nice
to read.
Can't wait for more =)
R
I haven't read anything like this before.
The storm king is kinda clueless when it comes to humans isn't he?
It kind of makes me laugh.
I love your writing style, it flows really smoothly and makes the story nice
to read.
Can't wait for more =)
R
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its becoming very interesting. People like Alex can sometimes be hard nuts to crack. Anyone with analytical minds have to always try and figure out the whys and whatnots about everything. So, the KING will have to be very inventive in order to break his PET down. Keep up the good work.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! good story! looking forward to the next update!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH! I can't wait for more! Seriously I really love how this story is turning out!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!! I need more, now preferably. ^_^
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhh GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!! I Looooooove it!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!! :P XDD
This story is AWESOME!!! I just can't get enough!!!! >______<
Your such a great writer! I luv u! LOL ^____^
This story is SO one of my all-time-favorite! I want more! >_< *sights*
It's a good thing that u make long chapters 'cause I would've gone completly insane by now! hihi :D XD
I can't wait to read more!! I love the idea of the King seducing poor Alex!~ It'll be Hot, I'm sure!
Thanks ALOT for the fantastic story! *hugs* X3
This story is AWESOME!!! I just can't get enough!!!! >______<
Your such a great writer! I luv u! LOL ^____^
This story is SO one of my all-time-favorite! I want more! >_< *sights*
It's a good thing that u make long chapters 'cause I would've gone completly insane by now! hihi :D XD
I can't wait to read more!! I love the idea of the King seducing poor Alex!~ It'll be Hot, I'm sure!
Thanks ALOT for the fantastic story! *hugs* X3
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
for a moment there i was thinking that maybe you'd add in the element that if alex ate any of the food, he would be trapped in that world for ever kinda thing. this chapter reminds me of fairy tale stories. so different from the first two chapters. i love it. great so far!