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for Stormy Skies

by PoisonedWine

schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read the story - all of it - and I really like it. It takes a different view point but is really interesting and shows so many possibilities, and I find myself quite admiring the way you're writing it. Complicated emotions - realistic, too - and beings with such differences that it underlines their characters. Very well done.
Looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god please update soon :(
I have this story bookmarked and I check it every few days for an update but it's been sooooooo long now I'm starting to give up
Love the way this is headed, interesting characters and a fun storyline
person Sarkukka
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've got me hooked so good. It all started with 57-38 and now Stormy Skies. I'm amazed. =))
The second chapter where those shadow-creatures came for Alex was really scary. And the Raiser's such an individual. Devious little brat. =)
Poor Alex been cheated and abducted how much more he's to bare? But I like it he got his wits back and isn't so frightened anymore.
This is a wonderful and such an imaginative tale. I hope you'll keep updating it as well as 57-38 too. Aren't I gready... =D
Thank you so much for the great fic(s). I'm eagerly waiting for more. ;)
person kylee123
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Stormy skies too! I absolutely love the Storm King. He is so cute and naughty. I had a harder time warming up to Alex because he was so stubborn. Now I realizze that he was just unhappy with everything in his life. I started the chapter thinking that Alex should go to pet training school so he could be a more useful pet to his master. Now I feel more sorry for him seeing how much Danny hurt him. Maybe if the Storm King focuses on showing Alex more love and comfort instead of the constant conflict, they might have a better chance at forming a bond. I agree with the Sage that the King should wait for Alex to give in to the sexual tension. I hope you post a new chapter to this soon. I am eager to see what will happen.
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is vwry well written and it did surprise me that the Raiser was short in stature but that makes it even better. I can't wait to read more.
person Agkelos
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm always very surprised in stories like this that the victim never contemplate suicide. It's what I would have done if I were in that kind of situation. Great story. Love it! Would looove to read more! Give Alex some more backbone, please!In
person SeriouslyJoking
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! And I don't mean the telly show. That was such a good chapter, and I'm glad you're back kicking it 1985 style (just make sure you're wearing your low rise Nikes and your hair two feet high). I have to say, I find Riser oddly...sexy. I shudder at the thought, but his pure control is kinda kinky. Ahem...maybe I need a new brain. They weren't handing out good ones in 1983. Love the description of the rooms, and even of the clothing. Everything you describe seems alive. Well done. Very well done. Update soon, and all that funky jazz.

"Seriously, I'm Joking." (SeriouslyJoking)

person lo
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have not seen this level of writing in a long time in this section. So far you have wonderfully created the setting and introduced the characters. I am really impressed. I wish I could say more. This is just beautifully written.
person maloanne
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was beginning to wonder ifthe story was abandonned. I am really hyppy it is not. And really hopping it will not be. I loved this chapter. So I am looking forward for the next chapter...
Bye
M
person PaipurrbakRighter
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just discovered this at Chapter 3 - really interesting and definitely gaining momentum. Poor Alex! Lined up for a 'fate worse than death'... awww. 'Purr