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for Teaching Love

by ForsakenDragon

person kaito
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story continue!! >_<
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!!

That was fucking hilarious, I absolutely love it! Well done with names though, their sort of a bit like their characters!

Love love for the author!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo cute... I love this story. The little kinky evil uke attacking the seme... And the thing with their fight for control. Loved the part when the seme got flustered and couldn't teach. Just precious. Pls write more! Hugs, SH
person HannaFO
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Steaming hot teacherxstudent smex XD Loved it!!
person bakergirl
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh buddy! that was hottttttttt!!!

xD
person Kryst Sutures
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for sex scenes! It's funny how Phyllis manages to lie about being a virgin and doesn't think he'll be found out. What a kinky virgin he is/was. I wonder what's going through his teacher's head about all this.

Also, I just realised his name is Phyllis. I've only met girls with that name. *snickers childishly*
person Shiyuri
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since Phyllis (btw it's such a strange name and at first sight I immediately thought of phallus LOL ) is a rebellious teenager, his inconsistency between being dominant and vulnerable is understandable. Mr. Rice, on the other hand, seems a bit bipolar to me. '__' He's serious and upright one moment, taunting and commanding the next, also easy to be flustered and embarrassed. I mean, people's emotions can change depends on the situation, but Mr. Rice's change in emotions doesn't have that consistency of a solid personality, if you know what I mean.

Anyway, it's just my personal opinion. :D I'm enjoying this so far, so a fast update would be excellent. ^^ Thank you~
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was hilarious...
person amanda
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter lol
person fanboi of legendry fics
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH man i wanted MORE hurry up would ya?!Any way im officialy HOOKED.MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!