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by Lunarwench

schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi again! Wow...this one was super hot! I loved the whole werewolf/vampire thing. Thanks to your friend for requesting this and to you for gifting it. I wrote a scene in my story 'As Death Gives Life' where my dog-god, Anubis, went canine and took Kagome. It was pretty hot, but I was surprised at the amount of people who skipped it or didn't like it so much because of the beastiality aspect. Who knew that not everyone was as kinky-minded as me? haha! Glad to see I'm not alone. As an author of smutty fun, I think that we should have an open mind when writing. By doing so, we can produce some naughty-good reads for people like us to enjoy! lol! Great job! Thanks!

~Rin
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well first of all I wanna say I liked the sexytime. As weird as that makes me I thought it was hot. Was this just going to be a oneshot? It has a lot of potential to be a really good multi-chap fic. Its weird that when you think of a dog/wolf and a man together its gross (in my opinion sorry anyone who likes it) but now that you've made it a werewolf and vampire its hot (also in my opinion and a lot of others too I bet.) well if you decide to continue with this fic could you send me a mesage or put me on the mailing list??

noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
person Gnome
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love Bastian's voice. His reactions were priceless.

Your description of The Change in both POVs was another of my favourite parts. Very vivid. Ouch. In most stories it's fluid shift, so it was nice to read such a belieavable account of something different.
person A reviewer
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A pity that y-gallery has such strict T.O.S., since this is undoubtedly a winner. I love werewolf stories, even wrote a few, but you have a decidedly new take on an old idea, and I love it. :) Very well written.
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Luna,
What an excellent fic. I liked the entire thing and it made me to go and watch Being Human again :)

I liked the switches from a boy to - the wolf - to the boy again and the difference in perceptions. Very well done and believable. Bastian got topped, haha! His character is appealing as well. The backstory on both is done in a very subtle way, which is the best for a one-shot. So, Bastian was turned years ago and Simon was born this way. Nice.

Thank you :D
person anon
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i could actually see more of this because their background seemed to set up more possibilities for their future
person NeonTokyo
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh Wolfsex XDD scary! I liked it! ^_^v