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by Lunarwench

schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome read. I love werewolves, and vampires alike, so that was a fun story to read.
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love love love it! Wonderul writing and great detail!
person Juana13
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww! I hope you really do continue with this! Cause I am lovin it! Please do!!!
person arya
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved simon
person smint45
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absoloutly awesome story!!!! Too bad it is a oneshot I really would have liked to know how it continues!!!!!! I thank you so much for sharing it with us!!!!! I really hope that some day you will write a sequal to it!!!!!! Thank you and see you in the updates of Granolabar Drabbels and Rooftop!!!!!
person aion
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to admit... this was hot. I love the dynamic you have going between these two. The story flowed very well and I am eager for a sequel. ;; I know this was meant as a one-shot, but I think there is potential for a lot more here. It would be interesting, at the very least, to see how the two get along after everything is said and done. Does Simon go visit Bastian every now and again? What happens on the next full moon, would the Were part of Simon search out Bastian, after a lengthy absence? Lots of possibilities. :D!

But, yes. |D Loved it.
person myladymystere
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an odd couple pairing that totally worked. I love the older worldy vampire getting ravished !!!! You pack alot of story in your short fics !!!!
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't suppos there will he a chapter two to this.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey; I'd have to agree with Jewel. This was a great story and I would love there to be more. To tell you the truth though, I've never had a thing for original stories and just went for fanfics of anime's but I must say you are making this an enjoyable experience. Well I'm off to read more of your stories. You really have some talent. Keep it up.
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really loved this story, and I loved the characters. Love between a werewolf and vampire yummy, have you thought of maybe continuing this story? I'm sure there is more to write about them and I really would love to find out if Simon is a trueborn werewolf. Besides they are mates now, werewolves mate for life. So they’re married. How would Bastian feel about that? I can just see it now poor Bastian out for the night looking for a one night stand, then his mate gets in the way and brings him back home and yadda yadda. I feel that there is more to tell, and I hope you do because only you can write it so well. But I did love the one-shot, great. Thank you.
Jewel