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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh no!! and caddy is wandering around in the market, while the tension mounts. yikes - kabi, you've really got our hearts thumping! love how wickedly sharp you are!!
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
June 14th
I vote for the annihilation of Dothan!!!! HA!!
Sorry but those folks are strange!!!
I know!!! They are just people struggling for
the best life they can make. But!!! They're WEIRD!!!
Really nice scene between Phidias and Henrik!!! Love Phidias!!!
The jury is still out on Henrik, 'cause he's so powerful and overpowering!
Like how Phidias still stays reasonable and continues to question him!!!
Really liked seeing Henrik loose it and have his temper tantrum!!!
All that secrecy came home to roost and he didn't like it one bit!!!!
Thanks,
R
I vote for the annihilation of Dothan!!!! HA!!
Sorry but those folks are strange!!!
I know!!! They are just people struggling for
the best life they can make. But!!! They're WEIRD!!!
Really nice scene between Phidias and Henrik!!! Love Phidias!!!
The jury is still out on Henrik, 'cause he's so powerful and overpowering!
Like how Phidias still stays reasonable and continues to question him!!!
Really liked seeing Henrik loose it and have his temper tantrum!!!
All that secrecy came home to roost and he didn't like it one bit!!!!
Thanks,
R
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your plot just took a turn for the awesome. Just, wow.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since you didn't include Phidias' reaction (well, reaction after the conversation was done with) I'm secretly hoping are brilliant little scholar won't like Henrik so much anymore. I'm just not a fan...BUT he does win some major points for wanting to destroy the Dothan!! What's curious is that there are some Dothan like qualities leaking into the world of Ivan and Malcolm and that mysterious mansion/club they are a part of. Very curious, very curious indeed. :) as always, i love it!!
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
destroy dothan @w@
i'm actually almost giddy with excitement on it being destroyed. And yet... what will happen to the carriers?
And what happened to Sean and Adrian? :O
i'm actually almost giddy with excitement on it being destroyed. And yet... what will happen to the carriers?
And what happened to Sean and Adrian? :O
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can Caddy get some ~action~ yet, please?! ;)
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually feel sorry for James...as weird as it sounds I think you really did try to make him evil and credit Soyinka's actions, but maybe his past has more to do with what happened in Dothan. I'll keep watching for that next update still haven't forgotten about Ivan thats for sure!
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't think Dothan is good but I wouldn't like to see their carriers hurt so hope it doesn't come to that... glad we're getting some answers; hope Phidias and the baby will be ok; thanks for the update!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is disturbing but brilliant. I read November and that was just mind blowing! You are an amazing writer and i cant wait for more chapters. Update soon xxx
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June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O^O
i did not think that James' record was that extensive. It has me very worried.
And clearly, no one else outside of Dothan approves of it.
Malcom and Ivan's relationship is interestingly cute, and i have to say, that i'm afraid of the rest of the Manor. >.>
I apologize for not commenting for often D: but don't let that stop you from writing more!
More please!
i did not think that James' record was that extensive. It has me very worried.
And clearly, no one else outside of Dothan approves of it.
Malcom and Ivan's relationship is interestingly cute, and i have to say, that i'm afraid of the rest of the Manor. >.>
I apologize for not commenting for often D: but don't let that stop you from writing more!
More please!