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Damn, poor Ghali! Poor Harley! Things are not looking up for the August Boys, you torture me with these turns >.< but I'd be lying if I didn't like them, thank you for the update hope to find more!

Oh boy, the suspense is killing me!! Loving your stories soo much, keep up the great work!

Aww man I think I know now that Ghali's been kidnapped because Anders and Caddy will be together >.< yuck! did not want that to happen [sorry] Caddy's just too much of a brat for me to like him. Ivan finally with Malcolm! I really like their story Ivan at first was this scary dude I've actually warmed up to the guy for some reason maybe because he is so disliked. James! Damn I had actually hoped James and hrley would have figured something out, I still dont think James was so evil but thats how you wanted him to end. I really wonder whats gonna happen to Dothan especially to Adrien I had totally forgotten what happened to him because I must have not payed much attention to the fact his father was Will. good show though I wanna know whats gonna happen to Ghali, Ivan Harley and Phidias.

So I reread your rewrite (hey it's summer) and LOVED IT!

The build up to this point had me on the the edge of my seat!
Love that Malcolm finally could give Ivan what they both needed.

The situation with James and Sheridan is crazy! James just dove of the deep end!!!
Can't wait to find out what happened!!!

And oh! Poor Ghali! Yikes!!
Will we get to see how a desert Sheik treats his carrier/virgin guests?!

Thanks!
R

i kinda wish that Ivan's part was a seperate fic itself >__> because for me i have no intrest him ,and i pretty much scroll past it lol, for i hold hate towards him for violating Cabby D: but other than that i enjoy it ^^ though i feel bad for cabby since anders and Ghali have a thing :( and cabby seems to have a bit of a crush on anders.

This was a great chapter. I can't wait for more. XO Your writing is just so great!

woah, this chapter was full of action!! Had my head swimming at times, actually. :)

K!

Wow!!! This story just exploded back!!! Wow!!!
God, you really know how to set up a reader!!! HA!!
Thanks!!!

R!

I hope everyone will be ok-thanks for the update!

ahhh thanks for the chapters Kabi :) brilliance as usual! can't wait to read more!