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for August

by minkabi

person hakkyou
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love your november story, so I was really excited to see that you'll make another story in the same universe Ö__Ö. Sounds nice so far!^^
person Maria
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems good so far! But I would really love an ending to November, hope you're not thinking about abandoning it?
person Gnome
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very moving, especially with the knowledge I have of this world from November.

I loved the little memory about the bed. It showed a strong family bond. And yet I sense that Phineas feels somehow torn over whether to keep his son's secret. As though he has loyalties elsewhere. I could be wrong of course. :)
person JaceQuin
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely think that this is worth going into more. I hope you do so. I really liked November and look foreward to reading more of this one.
person cfweber1b
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes I want more of this world- more Caddie- I hope you help him find his way and a good and decent spouse.
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds promising. I already feel for him.
person cricri
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story, I love m-preg theme so much, and I'm a big fan of your November story
person green
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never said it before now, but I will say it now, omg! You have a new story, I already have that knot in my stomach that I get when I see November. I am going to read August now.

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