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aww i thought there was a new chapter :( i hope one comes soon

TOTALLY WICKED!!!! Keep on doing what your doing. Its only going to get better, right?

Hi! Been away for a while but now I'm back and I'm thrilled you're writing more! This story is building up to be as unsettling and insidious as November, and I'm very curious to see where you'll take it. Reading November, we had to learn not to trust anyone, and I'm getting that same feeling here. The doctor obviously should be taken out back and shot (well, maybe not literally), but Adrian who seems to be meaning well is probably getting leaned on from superiors concerning the carriers and I'm afraid he'll the first of many to abuse the trust Caddy is forced to put in him... in a way he already has. I agree with what the father thought about this world - how it has gone terribly wrong somewhere to treat the carriers so. Hope you'll continue updating this one!
Thanks, Jo

Kabs...Kabs...buddy. You're killing me. Where's the story? Where have you gone? The people here miss you, your story is literally all I check for on aff.net. Hope you get back soon. ;)

i do hope that you continue this story, its not november but your writing is the best that i have seen online to date and the story line is interesting... so i guess you are going younger this time around. Update soon, you took a while for the last few chapters of november so i stoped visiting. Ho[e you continue on this one or start a long ter one again. Update Update Update

i <3 your story. And November was the shiznits :D

Keep writing more! I wanna read more!

Adrian is 15. Is he expected to contribute to the population at this age?

I felt every bit of Caddy's anguish and Phideas's love and confusion. What a situation to be in. Extremely believable reactions. Honest reactions.


Thank you.

It just kills me the mistreatment of the carriers- if the powers that be expect to have a population at all they had better take very good care of carriers- poor guys are traumatized enough and then to be told to take it like a man
argh! such unfeeling idiots- no wonder the carriers would prefer to hide their change.

soooo in the end, little Caddy ended up in CEC anyway, huh...
Please up date soon...