rate_review Reviews

Wow I'm really torn over this piece of writing, I don't think I've ever been more torn. On one side I love MPREG, and this is well written so I want to read it but on the otherside, the way carriers are treated in this story is utterly disgusting, and I find it hard to read 'cause it makes me really angry at times.

Some characters in this really drive me insane and I want to see the carriers fight against the opression they're forced to live in. Even though it's not likely that they can do much with the way their world is. It's good though because you write this all so realistically and you can really feel the emotion and invision what life must be like for all the people involved in this story. So keep up the good work :)

Hmm interesting, so Adrian and Sean are part of some fundamentalistic realigious group? I wonder home Phidias and Caddy are going to end up with, and wether the'll be able to stay together ... can't wait for more:)

Have already written a review but I have a few questions in regard to carriers. Questions are a follows:

1) When a boy goes through the change exactly what happens both physically and biologically.

2) When a carrier and a male have intercourse how do they fit together sexually.

3) When a carrier becomes pregnant how long is the gestation and where is the baby expelled form the body.

The reason I'm posing these questions aa they are vague in November and so far not in August. Perhaps you can do a chapter on a carrier from the moment he goes through the change to giving birth.

I know imagination plays a large part in mpreg stories but I like it spelled out. I'll know if you have read this by forthcoming chapters.

I could feel something was going to happen...poor Phidias. What happened to Cadmus?

It's Dr. Kosin again! That guy is incredibly power hungry. And he really likes beating people up. I think it would be something amazing if Dr. Kosin became a carrier. (Maybe he's too old though, what causes people to 'change' anyways?) He's beat up so many carriers and abused his power so many times that I'd like to know how he'd deal with the tables being turned. Would he continue his current sadism, but be unable to because of his status? Would he repent or something? I dunno if that's what you have planned, because you did bring him back into the story. But that's what I'm hoping. I would just love to see you experiment with a character like that because you really get into the psychology of them =D

And yes, poor Phidias. Dr. Kosin is a bastard. Probably the worst thing is that he doesn't give people a way out. The punishment he gives is always inevitable. =( There was really nothing Phidias could have done but what he did. So kudos to Phidias! He had to live through that. And I would really like to see Phidias go with Dr. Long also! I dunno, it would be a weird relationship because they were friends for so long, really awkward, but that would make it great. =D

I've been following up your series ever since you first started and I just absolutely love the theoretical work you've done in creating a possible situation and the resulting social interactions between a minority of 'females' and a dominating majority of 'males'.

It really isn't about gender itself, but the perception of what gender is, of the roles and stereotypes of gender, of a system gone horribly wrong.

It's just wow. I also love the gravity you've given the story because this sort of situation practically demands it. There are serious repercussions for such repression and the forced dehumanization of 'females' to that of second class or even pets or breeding machines...emotional and psychological repercussions. And you've delivered.

For that matter, I have a question. I can't really seem to remember Officer Kosin. He seems very familiar though and another reviewer seems to remember him. Was he from the November story? Was he that asshole who beat up Jesse as punishment/warning?

For that matter though, I'd like to see Officer Kosin 'officially' court Phidias. I think that kind of circumstance would be extremely interesting.

Ha, it's just that my guilty little secret is that I'm a bit of a sadist. I laugh while watching zombie movies.

Well, keep on trucking, soldier.

Is Kosin gonna die? I want him to die. I want to see him die slowly and painfully. Better yet I'd love to see him become a carrier and be used as a group bitch. Actually overall, I'd love to see the positions reversed. I'd love to see the assholes in charge become the people they're abusing. And most of all, I hope that things turn out well for Phidias. Though with your general style, I'm strongly in doubt that anything will turn out well. Somehow it seems that in your stories, nobody is ever happy (except for Tiger I think). There are pretty much never any bright sides to anything. All the people in charge are evil, raping bastards. I really like your writing style and the general idea of the story, but it's starting to get a bit to depressing to me. It feels like things will never be good for any of the carriers. *sigh* Oh well, bottom line, I REALLY want to see Kosin die.

The repetitious cycle of sadists. Do I dare see something happening between Kosin and Phideas? Now THAT would be sadistic. I don't think I could get enough of Sean and Adrian, Sean is much more like a 'good' husband; but he doesn't have a rebellious carrier, though I wonder what he would have done then. I am seriously hoping that some works of Phideas did survive. 2 months. Semi-freedom for 2 months. But then again most carriers end up happy after being forced into a pregnancy and then marriage, aren't they?
Do you seriously do not have a secret underground free carriers society going on? It's that true? That this is all that people know can exist and they can't hope or expect anything else.
What was up with the kid, what did Adrian mean usually improvement would be seen in months but now it's just a week. Is that physical improvement or the 'improvements' made from being threatened, or are they just drugged up to be more sedated.

*is going to be sick. maybe.* Not Kosin! Waaaaah... crap.

Thanks for the new chapter!
Poor Phidias! Wonder what Sean meant when he told Adrien not to be ashamed of what they are and what James fiance asked them to do... Love your writing, can't wait for more!