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for August

by minkabi

person hami
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's end. Personally, I like November better, but this story has its own attraction to me to be ignored ^^
The story, eventhough has different storyline, are linked in the end. That's what I like from ur style. It makes me 'ooh!' in then end!

Thank for sharing the story ^^
person hami
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jeez? How many languanges you master?
person kagecat
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i <3 you. and your story.
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this greatly... but ... this isn't an ending. You didn't resolve any of your storylines and you left everything up in the air. I don't know if you just got tired and decided to stop here or if you are going to start up again, and as the writer it's entirely your choice, but I do hope you go on... with the characters here, so we at least see some resolution in their lives.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kabi, thanks for sharing another wonderful story with all of us! I enjoyed the emotional rollercoaster the characters had to go through and love how you weave the tale. Congrats on completing another story and eagerly await to see what you do next!
person nivell
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOo!! Seriously, no, you can't end it there! But what about Anders and Caddy, and Ghali's new life and Sean and Adrian's new beginnings..oh my god, do you now know that there will be sleepless nights ahead for me because I will be pondering about all of them later on! Please don't stop writing...if you could write a sequel or even another story in your universe, I would be the most happiest reader out there. Much love for your immensely enjoyable story!
person L.S.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO KABI!!! I cannot wait to read more :) but you really outdid yourself with August. What a fabulous piece. I can't wait to see this on a bookshelf in the future and I can tell everyone I know that I was a fan of yours before the New York Times know what was up. ;) I'll be waiting for your next amazing piece!! thank you Kabi, for this amazing piece.
person Roya7777
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T.T

It's finished!!! :( I can't say anything right now! maybe tomorrow! T.T

I don't want it to be finished! :((
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I´m so sad that August is finished and I don´t know anything about Phidia´s baby and his another live with
Henrik. Anyway I thank you for great story.
person J42
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thanks so much for weaving this wonderful journey and sharing your creative talents. Please tell us there will be more. I loved Phidias so much, I really wanted to watch him with his child. You do leave us wondering about Caddy and Anders... perhaps someday in a sequel? ;-) Thanks again - and may the muse strike again soon!