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Poor Anders he just can't win!

Good things come to thouse hwo wait - thnaks for the new chapter!:)
I bet Adrian is getting punished sever for saying "I love you" to Sean... Realy, he's kind of weird, puting up with all the stuff this community is dishing out to him. I bet he's heading for a major argument with Phidias and Henrik for teaching the carriers only the house-wife stuff and because he got Caddy on the list for this dubious pics.
He's a very interesting character - struggling for freedom, yet longing for the love and affection of his people.

You finally updated! Where have you been ?! T_T -tears of joy- I assume you're a student that works, and so i am not really upset. :3 -hugs and cookies!-

O_O if Sheri doesn't get pregnant, even if it's not his fault, is he still going to get killed?! i have a bad feeling on that one. If Aaron says that it's Sheri that in the wrong... will they take his word for it? Or Sheri's?

Good GODS!! I just have to strong urge to fucking SHOOT Sean! GAH! These Dothan rules are pissing me off. They don't have wives, the have fucking slaves! And not in that hot sexual consensual way either. I just want this little institution of Sean's to burn and die, or for the tables to be turned, just once, long enough for him to see what exactly he's doing. That's not a relationship, that's the freekin dictatorship.

Caddy.... is seriously.... pissing me off. I huff in aggravation at this complete... idiocy. Ignorance. Or whatever you wanna call it, it's pissing me off. I wish someone would just break it down to him without and of that sugar coated shit as to what's going on. It's probably like a freekin porn book that puts these kids out there so that the government can make deals with guys that have enough money to take them away and freekin rape them or something. But thank GODS Anders has some sense in him. I can see that he likes Caddy, and i'm sure that even though they'll be family soon, it wouldn't doubt it if after their parents got together, their kids got together in this world too.

Thank you for the update :3 and i hope you're life is going alright. :3 -hugs! and awaits next update!-

Thanks for updating again! The Sean-Adrian scene was brilliant... esp. when Adrian spoke at the end! And I'm excited about the Cadmus and Anders dynamic coming up; interesting how they will deal with this "brotherly" thing.

omg these are the best chapters ive ever read this is the best fic ive ever read hell the best anything ive ever read...plz plz plz never let it end continue...oh and i think that cady and anders will make a great couple because he seems to care a lot about him and he wouldent mistreat him...but then again they are too much or a brother brother relationship so it might be odd. plz continue and never stop so long as you live you are the best writer ever.

(Risks getting on your nerves) Sweete, pleas date up! Can't wait for a new chapter!:)

*TEARS* IM SO SAD! I havent had my Kabi Fix in almost a week im going crazy i keep on cheking for an update like every hour and nothing. Kabi please update. I wanna know what hapens with Phidias and Henrick. :(

ARGH! I can't decide if I like Sean and Henrik! D: I mean, at times they seem so sweet and caring and then it's like BAM! 'I'm your master, you must obey me!' :: pulls out hair :: ARGH!

Love the story though :D

So I am not worried about Phidias and Henrik anymore. There is the issue of Caddy, hopefully, he understands and learns that carriers cannot afford to give away any freedoms they still have.
Sean and Adrian, no hope. maybe Sean will die and Adrian too, because I am assuming if Sean dies the CEC will kill Adrian too.
Sher and James, that is just trouble brewing, Harley is going to become the next yavisk.

OMG Finally! an update! -much hugs and cookies of joy!-

Phidias is still so unsure about the whole pregnancy thing, and i don't blame him. I don't want to go through that pain and all of the rest of the stuff that comes with it either. >.>

Sean... is turning into a totally ass and like... a control freak. It's ridiculous. He needs to be punched in the face a few times or something, for serious.

Imma need Caddy to get out of that hole of feeling like it's not needed to have a good knowledge base, that he's in. And he was so promising. Somebody needs to smack some sense into that boy. And skipping class... -sighs- maybe Henrik should just whoop his spoiled little ass. Really, he's going to need to find things out the hard way, since he's been pulled into this....what seems to me to be, like, the carrier model they want them to be. Stupid and easy to mold and shape however someone sees fit. I just wanna slap the shit out of him. For serious.

Harley has always creeped me out, and continues to do so. I hope we don't have a replay of November. I don't think my stomach can take that. I'd rather just have James commit suicide or something instead, as horrible as that sounds.

X3 I have to admit, that i am impressed with Henrik. Granted there was a bit of tension, and Phid really doesn't have much of a choice, but i hope things don't do a complete 180 once the 'deal is sealed' so to speak. :o and i didn't think they had condoms, or would want them around. Please let them be an abnormally happy couple T_T please. Because everyone else's relationship seems to be on the shit list and slowly moving up that list to compete for number one.

Thank you for the update! Please update again soon! :D XD