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by minkabi

person ~Queenie~
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"That afternoon, Adrian and Sean Wick decided on the name Jonah." My baby bro was born last sunday, and they named him Jonah! (It was before I read this =P)
person Avernion
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I read it all in one sitting. Took me hours, but I did it! (Does that make me a slow reader?) And I loved it. (Obiously) All these poor people. And I am very suspicious of Henrik and his none-firm!

Can't wait for the next chapter! You are a great writer X)
person Itchan
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story >< When I started to read it, I hadn't read November, but as soon as I finish all the available chapters, I was glad there was another story related to it, and read it as fast as I did with this one lol. I love this world you have created and I hope there are more stories about it :) If not, then ok :( I'll always have this 2 stories :)

The last chapter was really good. I read it like 2 times. And I noticed you edited some things because when I was reading some parts today, I was like,'wait...this wasn't here before' lol But anyway, hope the next chapter comes soon :) If not, its ok ^___^ I'll wait :D
person Pierette
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Scientists mostly, but also businessmen" -- I'm dying to find out what kind of business this guys are running ^_^

Adrian hadn't been teaching the carriers math at the CEC (the substitute did, so it had to be due to Adrian not the curriculum) but would like to teach them engineering at Woodacer?
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find all this secrecy surrounding Henrik's job to be very foreboding. You really got me waiting for the shoe to drop.
person kagecat
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O i think it's bad when you start reading a new chapter, and all it says is "The day before the wedding, everything suddenly turned frantic. Henrik had invited the vast majority of the guests ....." and your stomach starts to do flips and you feel sick and anxious. I don't even feel this sick and anxious when i watch horror movies.

....

you're good.

lol.


Gods i knew something was going to happen with Phidias and Henrik. But at least Phidias liked it, up until he wasn't allowed to get up that is. It would have been nice if Henrik would have given him a warning so that Phid could say if he was ready or not. But i guess what's done can't be undone, unless Phid doesn't get pregnant from that night. Caddy being useful and not troublesome actually worries me. I expect something to come up later.

It's good to see the carriers of Woodacre doing something useful, and maybe they won't feel so... trapped. Because just reading about them in their situations makes me feel trapped in their place. lol.

Yaaaa.... i'm still not liking Harley. At all. And I can understand Sheri's fears about going back to a certain place where the events that occurred in a similar place weren't exactly great or wanted.

Thanks for the update :D and i'm glad it wasn't totally horrible and it's updates like this that give me a little bit of hope and let me keep reading. :3 I await your next update!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite the shindig. Meeting all those people must have been nerve wracking, on top of dealing with the wedding plans.

I'm wondering what Mahir means by "the firm?" Sounds suspicious to me. Only because Mahir changed the subject when questioned by Phidias. Guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter. Please make it quick. Its torture waiting for each chapter.
person J42
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - you have such a fertile imagination and the understated tension is coming across so beautifully. I love this update so much! The mystery that is Henrik (and his firm) truly deepens, as we edge closer to the wedding. I'm so in love with Phidias - he's quite a character... please continue soon! Thanks!
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GRRRR there is no update were it shuld be kabi...i get impatient, kitty eat kabi's when she get impation :( plz update soon i want more cadmeus and her new brother. Hmm im so sad.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know. Been slacken' on my reviews and I know how much the authors live for their reviews. Its like a drug.

I don't think I've done a review since chapter 15. So to make a lone review short-that Revivalist religion sucks-really, really having a bad feeling about Henrick and hope to god everything works out for the best for all concerned.

The reviews sucks and I'll try to do better by reviewing the chapter as soon as I read it. The other way is just too hard. "hangs head in shame"