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I'm so happy I decided to check in late for updates...I loved it!- I didn't want it to end; I wondered if Henrick would be able to do anything when Kosin showed up, but my faith in him grows even with all his secrets-not sure what he injected him with but Kosin obviously didn't like it so I'm hoping for death and that he said he did it for Phidias too was awesome; love them and I'll never get enough updates so hope you get to update soon!

Great stuff! Love how Henrik is coming to Kosin's defence. This Phantom drug is interesting - very much looking forward to your next update! Thanks again!

This will be my shortest review, EVER!

I liked Henrik, actually, and by the end of this chapter I adored him. However, I hate how trapped Phidias feels on nearly all fronts, especially with his son.

Holy Mother of God and the Seraphim, Henrik's "firm" genetically engineers carriers! At least, that's the vibe I got, and from his statement regarding how he'd seen to it it never WOULD be Anders and Kosin's abject panic, I think I'm on the money. They've figured out a way to incite the reaction or repel it artificially.

That's what Kosin motherfucking gets. No words can describe my unholy GLEE!!!!

Henrik smiling slowly in that moment was B.A.
Nacht

OOOOOWWWWEEEEE!! "I suggest you make arrangements?!?" It would seem to me that this Phantom drug does something to the body? OMG! OMG! OMG! Please tell me that this drug can change a male into a carrier, PLEASE!!

Since Henrick came into the picture I was undecided if he was a good guy or a bad guy. As it stands now he is definately a good guy.

By Henrick telling Kosin before "sticking it" that this was for Phidias and Cadmus and that Kosin would never hurt another carrier makes me believe that Henrick knew what Kosin was all about or he is the best reader of people I've ever seen.

Guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to see what happens to Kosin. *laughs manically*

.....wow.....The last chapter was really REALLY Good >< I really love this fanfic. I can't wait to read more!! And the end? Wow, that wasn't expected, what Henry did O_O

Well, until next chapter! :D

Thanks for the new chapter, it was definitely worth the long wait! Seldom read something so enthralling!

Loved the Kosin-thing.

--Henrik spoke his mind and didn't disguise-- ehe, like hell.
Is the firm able to make people in carriers or prevent them from it??

I love Henrik and Phidias and hope they're going to be ok. Especially Henrik really seems to care for Phidia's and Caddie's well-being, regardless the fact, that he has a whole lot of skeletons in his closet^_^

It would be great, if you could explain a little bit of the geo-politics of this world some time...

Pleas don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!

what did Hendrik do to keep Andres from never becoming a carrier? And is that awful Kosen going to become a carrier- I would rather he die of something - Hmmm did Phideas become a carrier because someone injected him? Or are some via nature -Did some men hunt out "pretty" or gentle men and then get them converted?

A rec led me to you and after spending the last few days catching up, I'm glad I came... I liked November but think I'm liking August even more- Phidias and Henrik are my favorite couple; I'm really curious about what Henrik does since no one's giving details; thanks for sharing and can't wait till the next update!

So we hear of this illusive 'firm' again and this business group net that spreads worldwide. The carriers are also scientists. That was interesting. What is Caddie up to?
Adrian is in such a pathetic situation. Struggling to be independent only to love the dependence.

omg thats was so good i want another i want another pleeeeeeeeeeeas kabi plz update soon ..;omg ya go phidia ya you like that henrik lovin...i hope he comes to like henricks baby oh and i see you have an orginization thing going there very interesting ha scientist and buisnessmen nice way to water it down lol well um update soon or ya ill like get on everyday and stalk you :) okay bye give me more august soon k