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I'd hoped Anders and Caddy could develop more of a sibling relationship, but I guess we saw this coming and Anders is at least good to him; I'm with Sean about wanting to teach the carriers more so they're not stupid... some of Caddy's attitude after being at the center hasn't really been bright or lived up to his potential... but Sean's wanting to teach them why they obey doesn't help the carriers; like Soyinka and Sheridan and hope they can be happy with/without kids; Henrik and Phidias were yummy as usual but still curious about the firm; thanks for the update!

I don't normally like mpreg but this story is so compelling, I look forward to every chapter. Thanks for sharing it.

OMG... KOSIN GETS HIS... PHIDIAS GETS HIS.... CADDY GETS HIS... HENRICK GETS HIS... EVEN MAHIR AND ANTHONY ARE GETTING THEIRS... SOON... ANDERS WILL GET HIS... YEEHAAAAAAA

I just love Phidias with his gentle strength. And Coddy, young, idealistic, flirtatious babe.

Marriage contracts? Such a businessman!
And what is his business? How had he made sure Anders wouldn't be a carrier? What did Kosin say when he said Henrik was twice the monster?
Has Henrik found a way to counteract the mutation, and to harness the mutation to affect those he wants. Will Kosin be a carrier now? That would be hilarious.

omg that was so good i love henrick so much more and i hope cadmus ends up in good hands at the very least (mabey his big bro os something they like each other lots and he seems like hell take care of hime)and im so glad that he killed him. I f henrick had the seringe in his pocket he must do this often huh, wonder what the firm is all about now. and omg you too like a month to update im gratful that yopu still do but i wanna kill myself sometimes i only come to this websight for my kabi fix and you update like once a month grrr plz update soon . I wuv you and your awsome writing.

you know it took me like two days to read this because i kept stopping.

It makes me *UNBELIEVABLY* happy that Henrik isn't as cold and hard as he seems, and that he actually worries about Caddy and Phidias. And if i'm reading correctly, Kosin will be a carrier by morning, or in a few days ^o^ -GLEE!-

I hope the bastard gets gang raped. |3 -evil chuckle.-

omg!!! the phantom!?! Did these "scientists" find a way to induce carrier-hood?? and that note about Anders- did he find a way to reverse it?? Woah, you are quite possibly going as deep as one can go!! Publish it?? :) haha can't wait to read more!

LOVE THE HEART. GREAT STORY. VERY WRENCHING.

I've said it before and I'll say it again: OMG. OMFG.
Best thing Henrik has ever done! Wonder what it was in the needle? I gotta say the moment when Caddy showed up and got himself introduced, by Henrik, to Kosin while Phidias could only watch... that was one of the angstiest moments of the whole story, of ever! I ginding my teeth and squeezing my fingers like crazy. Excellent. I hope we'll find out more about what Henrik actually does, and why a man like Kosin can call him a monster. I'm worried, yet glad of the continued evidence that Henrik has a heart, however wrong some of his ideas are.