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Excelent as usual Please update soon. Thnaks Kabi

your updates have made meh happy :D very much so X3

i ALMOST feel sorry for Kosin. Almost. lol.

:o and i didn't think Caddy was so naughty XD it's kind of nice that he's not totally oblivious of everything, but he is still quite brainwashed about carrier status in the society and about the CEC.

keep updating please! XD

Poor Kosin that was a day from hell! And from the sounds of it things are only going to get worse if his hubby starts acting like every other hubby. I have to say Caddy got off lighter than I expected. I thought for sure he was going to get the whooping of a lifetime.

I actually think Caddy got off lightly considering all the rules he broke, but I can understand he's still just a kid; kosin really should appreciate Malcom... he seems a nicer husband than most; thanks for the update!

Things are getting more and more interesting! I love the way you write. I can feel what they feel.

Thanks for writing :3

I think Caddy is about to find out being tutored at home is going to be a lot tougher- he will be required to use his brain which the centers dont seem to like.And Ivan is about to get schooled on what it really means to be a carrier. I htink Malcolm is going to be good for him .Even though he deserves a creep oh wait that was his father.

Brilliant. Hands down. Love your rich characterization. Won't insult you with inadequate praise, so I'll stop here --- and wait breathlessly for your next update. Thanks for sharing your talents and efforts! :-)

Kosin's transformation is so very interesting; the ol' becoming what you hate/fear the most. Of course I still dislike Kosin, but like everyone else he is a victim of the times. I'm re-reading and applying this to each of the characters in August and November and what a difference it is making. It's making me want to know the history of this place and time desperately! Of course that may never come and may not be your intent, but the more little tidbits of information you give us, the more I feel as if they are just chips off the tip of a huge ass iceberg! haha I'm so happy for Sher though! Things are turning out well :) BUt gah...those damn Dothans. Not a fan, not a fan at all.

Ivan seems like he is going to end up doing something like go insane. His husband seems to be too good. Ivan is probably the most complex of your characters, what with the becoming what he fears to become. I am surprised, he is not the least bit guilty yet at how tough he made things for carriers. I would have thought things from a new perspective changed him.
I love Sher and Aaron.
Adrian, he wants to be dependently independent. The poor boy. What kind of a mother will he make? His child will be full of his bitterness and the struggle to be free.

I am totally feeling sorry for Adrian here and those
land of Dothan followers are creepy!!!!! CREEPY!!!

Really like how you've moved things along within
each story line. Love the transformation of Ivan!!
He's a pip!

Thanks,
R