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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap i love you!
that is a strange turn of events, both in james' case and in kosin's. @_@ but i LIKE it.
please keep going X3 sorry i haven't reviewed lately @_@ school hates me. A new chapter is a great upside to my day. :3
that is a strange turn of events, both in james' case and in kosin's. @_@ but i LIKE it.
please keep going X3 sorry i haven't reviewed lately @_@ school hates me. A new chapter is a great upside to my day. :3
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I have been reading your story since you where a couple of chapters into November. I remember looking at it wondering where someone could go with such a idea. Yet the moment I started reading, I had to add you to my little list.
I have grown to in a way to Love to hate your stories. Every time a new chapter is up, my gut clenches. I sit at the computer waiting for it to load asking myself why am I still reading this. You have made this world that feels it is ready to take everything away from someone because they can breed. They are made into a type of slave and have to like it, if they don't then they must be unbalanced and need correction.
The next generation are learning to want to be like this. Enjoying the attention until they fall into someone's trap and end up stuck with them for the rest of their lives. It is not about love, but hunting down a breeder and fucking him before anyone else gets a chance. Or using your position to gain one. Then saying the breeder is unstable when he doesn't want to just be a baby machine. All these rules to show them what they are meant to be like. Being forced into it by fear, humiliation or the threat of being sent away. Everyone's worst nightmare is changing into one of these people.
I have to say, I sit and read yelling at my computer that it's not fair. I have to stop sometimes as I get so angry or upset. The mental games that are used on everyone is amazing. I am waiting for a breeder to understand the system and use it to his advantage. Though I can't seem him getting far.
Now I know that might look like I am flaming you. I am really not, all those things I have said I mean. This world you made is cruel and not equal. Yet I can't stop reading. You bring people in with your chars. It is easy to feel for them. Relate to how they are all feeling and wishing you had to power to make it better. That life isn't fair and one way or another you will be forced to conform to a role in life. The fact some of them see it and cry knowing it is too late to change. That as much as they hate it, it is safe as it is what they know.
The only fault I can find in November and August is they have a ending. I read your stories dreading that the next one will be the last. I love to hate your world. It is different and goes into lots of peoples lives. It isn't just about being the hero and getting the 'girl'. It's about something simple as living, that even for some is such a struggle some I am sure have forgotten how to.
This isn't much of a review. I just keep saying to myself, I will do it but when I finish reading. I would just rant when it's not what I mean. I love your work and hold my breath busting for another chapter. I hope you never run out of ideas in this world. I love watching it grow and change. Seeing what other 'people' think is fine to do to each other.
Thanks for reading
-HallowsEve
I have been reading your story since you where a couple of chapters into November. I remember looking at it wondering where someone could go with such a idea. Yet the moment I started reading, I had to add you to my little list.
I have grown to in a way to Love to hate your stories. Every time a new chapter is up, my gut clenches. I sit at the computer waiting for it to load asking myself why am I still reading this. You have made this world that feels it is ready to take everything away from someone because they can breed. They are made into a type of slave and have to like it, if they don't then they must be unbalanced and need correction.
The next generation are learning to want to be like this. Enjoying the attention until they fall into someone's trap and end up stuck with them for the rest of their lives. It is not about love, but hunting down a breeder and fucking him before anyone else gets a chance. Or using your position to gain one. Then saying the breeder is unstable when he doesn't want to just be a baby machine. All these rules to show them what they are meant to be like. Being forced into it by fear, humiliation or the threat of being sent away. Everyone's worst nightmare is changing into one of these people.
I have to say, I sit and read yelling at my computer that it's not fair. I have to stop sometimes as I get so angry or upset. The mental games that are used on everyone is amazing. I am waiting for a breeder to understand the system and use it to his advantage. Though I can't seem him getting far.
Now I know that might look like I am flaming you. I am really not, all those things I have said I mean. This world you made is cruel and not equal. Yet I can't stop reading. You bring people in with your chars. It is easy to feel for them. Relate to how they are all feeling and wishing you had to power to make it better. That life isn't fair and one way or another you will be forced to conform to a role in life. The fact some of them see it and cry knowing it is too late to change. That as much as they hate it, it is safe as it is what they know.
The only fault I can find in November and August is they have a ending. I read your stories dreading that the next one will be the last. I love to hate your world. It is different and goes into lots of peoples lives. It isn't just about being the hero and getting the 'girl'. It's about something simple as living, that even for some is such a struggle some I am sure have forgotten how to.
This isn't much of a review. I just keep saying to myself, I will do it but when I finish reading. I would just rant when it's not what I mean. I love your work and hold my breath busting for another chapter. I hope you never run out of ideas in this world. I love watching it grow and change. Seeing what other 'people' think is fine to do to each other.
Thanks for reading
-HallowsEve
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I myself am somewhat puzzled about that dinner party. Maybe next chapter?
Sure would like to know what kind of "business" Henrik speaks about. Got a glimpse when Henrik injected Kosin with something that turned him into a carrier. Can't wait to find out what this "business" is up to.
Please hurry up with the next chapter. August is one of the my top ten stories.
Sure would like to know what kind of "business" Henrik speaks about. Got a glimpse when Henrik injected Kosin with something that turned him into a carrier. Can't wait to find out what this "business" is up to.
Please hurry up with the next chapter. August is one of the my top ten stories.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really love this update. I love how Henrik was reaching out to Phidias to jointly decide on Caddy's earring issue; and thought Henrik made a really good move then. Then the whole "experiment" thing was so sinister, it sent chills down my spine. The Ivan and Malcolm drama was amazing. I love the tension you built up and explored - and I'm curious about discipline and how Malcolm wants to do it his way. He's so sweet and they are so perfect for each other - and yet Ivan doesn't know it. Thanks for the update. Love you for it.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
such a great chapter, I like Kosin more and more, can´t wait for more
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ivan. He's an ass, but an poor ass.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please the next chapter!!!!
I love Ivan character. He was such a monster, but with such a sad storie. He was made a monster....
I hope he find happiness in the end. And peace with himself.
M
I love Ivan character. He was such a monster, but with such a sad storie. He was made a monster....
I hope he find happiness in the end. And peace with himself.
M
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kabi,
I haven't reviewed for a while but I still LOVE your story, esepcially Ivan - thank you so much for the new chappy with so much of him in it :D
I haven't reviewed for a while but I still LOVE your story, esepcially Ivan - thank you so much for the new chappy with so much of him in it :D
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious about how Malcom and Ivan will end up and whether Ivan will adjust... what has Henrik done to Phidias/what's the experiment; thanks for the update!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And each time I read a new chapter, it makes me ponder a lot of things, mainly about control and man/ woman relationships.....
So I am eager for the next chapter, even if I don't review each time, be assure I am an avid reader.
Bye
M
So I am eager for the next chapter, even if I don't review each time, be assure I am an avid reader.
Bye
M