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Thank you, it makes a lot more sense this way! Soo, I can't wait to find out what exactly happened to Josh and what Will Mackenzie - Adrians dad - has to do with it.

BTW, what I especially liked about the latest Ivan/Malcolm episode is, that Malcolm apparently tried to give Ivan, the freshly changed carrier mans work to make him feel better - What other husband would do that?? It's a sham, one of Ivans issues seems to be, that he has never been very manly in the first place...

There are days when I'm sure you're trying to irritate the ever-loving hell out of the Feminist In Me. Then I remember that I love this story to death and its totally worth it.

Fantastic job, I love the plot and the concept and, of course, the characters (well... some of them. There's only so much little Feminist can take). Can't wait to see more!

This story is so freaking awesome. I realy like Malcome. And I really like Ivan. It feels like there is a depth to him. He's been an ass, but I hope he can be happy. I feel for James. Man, what a life ;_; Allt the characters are great. Your writing is great. Like a famous boy once said
"Can I please have some more". =^-^=

Yey, thanks for the new chapter! I love Ivan SOO much! Can't get enought of him! What is James up to? What is wating for Phidias and Caddy in the Emirats? And hwo the hack are Saul Jefferson and Will Mackenzie?...

I know I'm greedy, I just can't wait for more!:D

...poor Josh

I'd like to see Malcolm win Ivan over w/o hitting him... curious about what Phidias and his son will find when they get to the desert; thanks for the update!

Thanks Kabi - another satisfying chapter! :-) Definitely looking forward to Wafra now. I don't think we've ever had you cover a foreign land in this world so far, so I'm really looking forward to this exotic place you're taking us. Love dear, sweet Malcolm - and how spunky Ivan is. Excited to know if James is pregnant. Thanks for your efforts, so glad to have another August update.

dude Ivan does not know how good he has it! Malcom is great. I thought that Ivan would be smarter about it since he used to monitor carriers and he's such a calculating guy. man I feel bad for everybody in this story. Really interested in Charlie and Keith though. wonder if charlie was as rebellious and discipline-deserving as Keith implies with his well-versed instructions to malcom about discipline.
This story alternately thrills and creeps me out. really great, thank you

I'm a big fan of mpreg and August is just an amazing story I have to say I like it more than November because I have grown to like each character and appreciate what they bring to the story [it can also be ebcause they are older around their thirties and late twenties so its an interesting take]. At first I was confused in the way you brought in Kosin and it almost sickened me I don't know why I had made him out to be this ugly looking character and then when he's transformed into a breeder I was thrown off even more. Yet the scene in the last chapter with the meal and the other breeders I came to really like him haha. His story is fresh and you want to know what Malcolm or what Kosin will do next. You question Malcolm a lot like when will Ivan finally push him to the edge when will it be done? Ivan needs to fight and yet Malcolm doesn't want to. I think its funny that out of any husband Ivan could have gotten he got the most opposite man, both are strong yet when Ivan will come to realize it? I dont know. Phidias is another favorite he and Henrick seem like the most "normal" couple and I loved their whole courtship Caddy though annoying is cute...some of the time other than that he's a pain-in-the-be-hind I see wedding bells in the future with him and Anders that is unless he does something dumb again and gets caught out in a field. Its no wonder why I've come to love your older breeders. Sheridan is another favorite because he is like the resilient breeder but not the type to really cause any problems or be over the top like Adrien but Adrien seems to be more stubborn than anything he's the type who can't help but rebel no matter what even living the life of a married couple he cant be tamed to do what others want him to do. I'm really interested in whats happening with James. It is strange in a land where carriers are basically "women" I guess the feelings and actions he exhibits on Sheridan can almost be seen as a lesbian relationship in a way that's what must be hitting a nerve on his husband. He must have known James had exhibited more "manly qualities" such as being attracted to other carriers and lets face it if he knows James is capable of wanting and pursuing a relationship with a carrier than that makes their relationship equal and that's not what his husband wants he married a woman not a man. I'm interested in what the results are especially for Phideas, Kosin and James. Sheridan and Adrien seem to be coming to a close as I think they should be, but they will surely missed ^^

I love August! I think because it has less characters and you go into further details about their lives that it rings easier to read as well as like the characters, not like November where many of the other couples were far more interesting and more like able than other characters. The only one I have to say does get on my nerves often is Caddy, gosh he is such a kid despite him wanting to dress like an adult and act like one too its just makes him more childish for having such a smart papi and supposedly being smart too he doesn't come off as being very bright. Love it though! Update Soon Please!!