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wow. that was really good.

That was an awesome fic I've ever read! So bittersweet, but realistic and I appreciate that in slash. I like happy endings too, of course. :D

And most of all, listen to your conscience also known as your sister. It would most wise...

It would seem that my attack dog, Kuromei, has already taken a liking to you. And since she mentioned my name, I suppose I could drop a review here as well. It'd be my first, so congrats for that honor. I don't see any real reason for you to constantly reiterate the fact that you're a guy. I only did that because someone called me a woman, and I instictively felt defensive. As for the story, great job. Very good use of vocabulary; more than anything I would've come up with. The scenery reminded me of London. I don't care whether your characters have physical descriptions or not. I picture them in my head however I want. I believe I saw a trenchcoat somewhere in there (my head). If the story's a oneshot, then it's a great oneshot. If it's a serial, all the better. I really hope the wife gets better (it's always sad if someone dies), but I also hope the two men get together as well. Happy endings for all! Keep up the good work. ~Young Sage

Wow. This was really, really good. Very poetic. =3 It would have been nice to have had descriptions of Tristan and Liam beyond their names, though. Unless the lack of description was intentional, like the way Young Sage writes his story.

In any case, I'd like to see more of this story. I'm curious as to how the title fits. *tilts head* I'll be waiting patiently. ^w^

A steamy affair :)

Excellent story! I would love for you to continue the story. And you know I'll always Beta for you, if you ask, you perfectionist you. I'm not entirely sure my punctuation is correct in the previous sentence. It's good to see some actual *authors* writing fiction as opposed to all the authoresses on the site. I really do hope you continue to write, despite whether or not you continue this story. I enjoy your sense of irony and your colorful descriptions, granted there are only so many terms for rectum that are poetic as well. I hope your foyer never gets too crowded and may your gazebo always be open--or maybe the other way around.

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