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This is wonderful, you should continue it...

I love this story. Matt and Tobias make such an awesome couple. I am halfway through right now. Keep up the good work

I just finished chapter 8 and the one question that I keep thinking abous is why Trent did not approach Matt with his feelings over the years. It seems Trent has been jealous of every boyfriend that came along but he never tried telling Matt that he was still in love with him. That is very sad. Plus Tobias is being rather merciless about the whole thing.

Aw perfect chapter . . . : )
I really really love this story and I wish you would continue soon. I can't wait to see how Matt and Tobias' relationship continues. Very good sex scene, by the way. Loved it : )
Hope you update with the next chapter soon. Really can't wait, and I look forward to it already!!!

Well, I just finished ch. 11. What a great chapter! lol

I'm glad Matt is becoming more comfortable w/Tobias. I feel bad about what happened between Matt and Trent. But seriously, Trent came back to get back w/Matt? He was back two years, but had yet to let Matt know he wanted to get back with him?

Anyway, excellent story; I'm sorry I'm all caught up!!!!

Hopefully you'll update soon????

Have a wonderful holiday!


Oh, and why did AFF delete you a/n???

I kept waiting for his "friends" to interrupt them in mid-act. And we may have found out Matt's secrets but I have a feeling there are a lot of secrets under Tobias' belt. And just how is Matt going to handle them?

I just started reading this a few hrs. ago and I'm on ch. 5. Hysterical!!!!! This latest chapter, where Tobias and Matt are in Matt's office, OMG, I was cracking up!!! When Sara walked in and she could tell immediately what was going down! She gave Tobias directions to the bathroom; I was laughing so hard I was crying!

What a great story this is!!!! I'm really curious tho about that place Matt's friends dragged him to that night. And how come Matt hasn't asked Tobias what HE was doing there!

Anyway, great story; on to the next chapter!

Oh God! Mallory is so fucking funny! I love that guy! Snowball, Snowy, he's hysterical! I just finished w/ch. 7 I think. So funny.

But...so sad and disturbing. Poor Matt; to have to change everything in his life when a relationship ends. That's really sad. And I also feel bad for Trent; I had a feeling there was something more to him just being angry w/Matt when he found out that Matt actually slept w/some random guy at the spa. Must be so horrible; going thru life loving someone who doesn't love you back. So, so sad.

Anyway, awesome, awesome story; I can't stop reading it!!!! I just wanted to point out a few errors; Idk if you're gonna go back and edit, but I thought I'd let you know. His self should be himself; example, you write getting his self off of Tobias, should be getting himself..... Also, there are some sentences here and there throughout the story that have missing words. I can't remember them off the top of my head. But, no biggies, certainly does NOT detract from this excellent story!

Ok, now I gotta continue reading!

omg, i saw that comic strip and i was...
holy...effin...shit...NO!!!!
hahahaha
anyway, luved the art, but i really hope you update the real last chapter soon *puppy eyes*
I am REALLY! looking forward to it!
cant wait!!!!! : )

What a crazy ending, but so funny!