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for Narrative of Soul Against Soul

by behindthelights

schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I got to say this is one of my favorite stories...... It is such a awesome story.... :)
person kylee123
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Render and Josh are a match made in heaven. I get the feeling that they are going to get into a lot of adventures while Josh parents are gone.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite, if not my favorite, stories right now. Honsetly, I didn't think Dolly had it in him, but boy is not taking no for answer, so yay for him. And of course Render is lovely and can't wait to see what he does when he wakes up.
person Tsuki8
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was freakin' awesome! Love the dom uke, and the last chapter left me droolin'. Please continue to update this story.
person MysticMoon
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmm Another great chapter! I'm still very much interested in this, I like how it is all unfolding, not too quickly and not too slowly.
person Breath Caught Holding
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I love the new chappy. I just love Render. Can't wait for more updates.
person kylee123
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very exciting. I think Render has fallen harder than he planned to. I hope they get to have more steamy make up sex now.
person MysticMoon
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! I'm pretty speechless,
it was nice to see an insight into Render and see that he such a confident person.
this chapter really helped give him more dimention
I can only wonder whats happening with Josh and how he is feeling now too,
I'm starting to think that Zasha isnt such an asshole, he seems to care about his brother despite being sex crazed1
Great chapter, cant wait till the next one!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story freaking kicks ass. I love cross dressing boys, but hardly even find any that I really like. All of the characters are great really. I'm wondering what's up with little freshman stalker. I don't really know what else to say except that I just love this story and I can't wait for updates.
person MysticMoon
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I FREAKING LOVE THIS !!!
It's so good, I like the idea of a dominant bottom!
It's original and really hot!
I can't wait to read more, I really like how the characters are developing and how emotions are portrayed!
Thanks for a great read!