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for Before It Struck

by GreatMasterM

person Pagan
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Loved all of them, and wish there were more! ^_^
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not sure why but I liked this one more than the previous three parts. I loved the ending, which makes no sense, because its not like I didn't know how it was going to end, beina prequel and all. I love your coming out stories. So much great angst.
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it still doesn't explain how tyler got gary's picture...
ASOTA
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I really do love your work. All of it. Thank you, this story really made my day.
person Kuromei
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggle!* Tyler's POV! X3 Sweet! XD It was interesting to see the inner workings of The Brothers. Interesting in the mildly disturbing way. =( *shrug* But Tyler was stalking Gary before G ever noticed him. X3 *giggle*

I wouldn't know what it's like to find out you're attracted to the same sex, but I imagine it's pretty close to what Tyler went through. At least he didn't go into denial forever, like a character from another fic of yours. >w>;;

Okay, constructive criticism... A few grammar mistakes here and there, but I can count them on one hand, so it's no big deal. Uh... That's all I got. ^__^;;

Meep! Waaay past my bedtime! X3
~~Kuromei