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for The Problems With Detention

by hanyou007

schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the name Seria. Its interesting and exotic. Though I am curious if your futa-girls are the type with balls or pussies and cocks. Either way I have always been one for dirty talk and I love how severe it is in this story. Though, I find myself perplexed as to why the school would single them out as a 3rd gender with different uniforms. Might as well make everyone wear the shorts. Good job. :)
person Bishonen
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bitchy futa girls are great and so are you.

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person sereia13
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot story, though a little too much swearing for my taste, but that's just me. Slutty teachers are always fun to mess with ne? And I agree with the others, there should be a second chapter, I want to see how the girl in the car AND th teacher act at her house =)
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story. Hope you'll continue it. Maybe stephanie bringing friends?
person Raynee
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
we need more stories like this, with all the slash out there it's good to see a good old girl/dick-girl story, keep up the good work.