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for Do Not Fall Down Stairs

by BobbyJustGotSheared

schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome. And funny. And energetic. And funky-fresh. I'm digging it, madame. I am, I am. Keep writing!
person Kryst Sutures
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've got to say that I fucking LOVE this so far! The characters are so refreshing. Interesting to see someone write a fairly flamboyant gay guy instead of all the "he acts so goddang straight but he loves a boi" gay guys. It's refreshing somewhat XD. I can't wait to see how this all goes down. Great work.
person Aphelion
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This story rules! Titus sure is funny. I love his remarks. Updateeeee plz! :D
person j.s
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol interesting
im still trying to work out how his name is actually pronounced...i think im saying it wrong caus it sounds cool in my head
anyway great chapter
update soon
person j.s
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tommorrow?
wtf...not humanly possible but yea woteva
anyway another cool chapter
and cant wait for tommorow ;)
person Camui
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I DECLARE YOU AS MY RIVAL. -Points dramatically, posing on a rock, waves crashing behind him.-
I shall not let your witty dialogue and brash actions in a high-school setting out-do my own!

OMFGHAXPLOXZORZ.
-Finger shakes a bit.- A declaration of rivalry has been vowed! Accept my challenge or back down and be forever known to me as...
-Whispers.-
Douche-fag.

OHSNAP WUT NOW SON WAT U GON DO ABOUT IT!?!??!

-Coughs. Clears throat. Casually walks away.-
person Kryst Sutures
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, I just fucking love this story. The penis-fruit thing almost killed me. Honestly. His ideas of flirting are quite...avant garde, I suppose. Titus has such a dirty mind. I love this kid (gets stabbed by Titus) so much. I'm so looking forward to his next encounter with Mr. Luz. Yeah. I am in fact shutting up now.

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