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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! I feel really sad for sae. Especially when he wondered why nobody loves him :( that was just so sad to me. Please finish!!
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, so please update it
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey this sounds really goody yay normal people please continue
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!
Please continue...I wanna know what happens! *whines*
Please continue...I wanna know what happens! *whines*
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WERE IS THE OTHER CHAPTERS!? GIVE UGLI CHAPTERS! UGLI EAT YOU FACE!
OH!
*looks under pillow* Chapters?
*sniffle*
(Translation- I loved it, and would be very pleased with more chapters, thanks!)
OH!
*looks under pillow* Chapters?
*sniffle*
(Translation- I loved it, and would be very pleased with more chapters, thanks!)
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think your story has great potential. go ahead and continue it and enter it in the contest! you never know, your story might turn out to be completely awesome and be recognized or win the contest. ^_^
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to drop this story? Or will you eventully continue it? I was just wondering because I keep checking for updates, and there haven't been any, so I was wondering if maybe you were dropping this story?
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should absolutely continue this story. I like it quite a bit. It's true, most of them are about smexy men (on both sides), but the fact you've made one of the MC's a bit overweight and the like gives the story a better sense of being "real." I think you should keep going. I'd love to read more.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start to a story, and not everyone can be cute and perfect. Please continue with this one. I don't see any reason why you wouldn't have a fair shot at competing. Some grammatical editing is needed, but the writing and plot are sound. I certainly enjoyed it and was ready to click on "Next Chapter."
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your first chapter, and am looking forward for more! I hope you continue with it! I really am hooked already! I love the idea you have :) Until your next chapter! =)
Jades
Jades