rate_review Reviews

Hey, that was a really nice story you got there. Definitely love the twist of the fairy tale, especially how you formed the characters. The Wolf's dialogue was really fun to read in my opinion, although I have to say, the scene between him and the granny is a bit too vague. I mean, when she finally reveals herself as alike Erzebet, such a chance for a chilling and thoughtful description feels rather lost to me. I mean, why would a woman who seems so frail be able to talk to the wolf as if she could truly control him, young or old? Even more, how could she be able to transoform with the blood of a maiden? Was the forest more than it seems? Was she a satanist? Or something more?
I know it's a fairy tale, but even fairy tales leave a little space in their words to explain, like Snow White's stepmother being a witch, or the fact that Cinderella had a supernatural guardian responsible for her midnight escapades.
I know that you have yet to reveal all in the next following chapters, but I think you should take a look back at the last scene. I love your prose throughout the story, but the end...well, I think it needs a little fixin' that is all.

Wow, I'm distrubed -.-'

i liked it, good start. cant wait to see what you will do with the other brothers grimm stories