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for Lover's Spit

by treeveins

schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to fucking kill you if you don't write more.
No joke man.
-Waves around spork-
I'll stab you in the mother-fucking eye.
I WANT MORE >=(
Okay =3?
person Roanae
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story already and its only the first chapter! You are an excellent writer and I will definitely look out for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! :)
person Night Writer
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the hell! That was friggin' awesome! Why didn't you write chapter two? And why did chapter Three run off with Four? It's realistic and intriguing, and now you've got all the questions built up in my head. What happens to Auguste's love life? What made him snap? Why did Damien get held back?!

I know it's been a while since you wrote Lover's Spit... but I really like your style. If you ever continued the story line or any other.... that would be amazin'
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is off to an interesting start. I've only seen like one other story dealing with a male with an eating disorder. It's interesting to see. I like that this has a fairly cliche theme, but it's got an interesting twist to it that keeps me from rolling my eyes. I can't wait to see more of it.
person RJaneyP
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done, makes me want to read more! G
person zZane
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you write. It flows nicely in a way you don't see around here enough. You've got talent. It's fun to read, that flow you have going, and I'll keep checking back. c: