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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its a good story, and it is too bad you are not getting the reviews you desire
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, it'd be cool to see the page. That chapter was good, relationship development is definately needed in all stories (with the exception of PWP...). Can't wait for the next update, and I'm sorry you're not getting much reviews, your story's brilliant and definately deserves them
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Even though the opening premise is kind of seedy, it comes across as intelligent. Keep it coming. Maybe a little longer chapter next time?
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my :3 I don't know if I've actually reviewed this yet, but I am now! ;D A sex machine? That's crazy hot! And the worker interfering with the machine...only to make the customer, buck like wild? XD burning hot.
I'm glad to see more to Leandre than just the person who wants to help the customer out of the emotional shell ;3
Thanks for writing!
I'm glad to see more to Leandre than just the person who wants to help the customer out of the emotional shell ;3
Thanks for writing!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait... you're not a review eating tentacle monster?! :P Haha, this would be good as a graphic novel, and I loved that chapter :P
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that what comes from your head is definitely top-grade! not at all scary!
so please, I beg you, can you give me more?
so please, I beg you, can you give me more?
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, creepy machine. I'm surprised it doesn't break out of that place and hunt Gareth down when he's away form it for too long. This has got me intruiged, can't wait for an update :P
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, your all in luck, the second chapter is almost done.
Brownie.
Brownie.