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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should make it so they get rescude by the soldier dudes. that would be cool.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A really good beginning. I'm definitely intrigued and eagerly look forward to more chapters. Good luck with your muse.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update because there is alot of potential in this story
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It looks good so far, I would like it if you wrote longer chapters though, but so far you have definitely captured my attention.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Umm..I must say that it is a good start. I'm really interested of what it is to come. I really would like to read more. So, please don't stop :(
Until the next chapter then :)
Until the next chapter then :)
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this seems interesting! ^^ I hope you'll continue this story. :) It has a lot of potential to be a really good story. ^^
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this looks really good. I hope that you write more soon!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, mpreg! I can't wait for an actual chapter, it sounds interesting so far!
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good start, you have me very intrigued about whats going to happen and i love Mpregs so woopwoop to you for having a go at one. Update soon please.
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope u cotinue!