rate_review Reviews

Hey, great stuff you've written.

KEEP. IT. UP!

I love this story! Please continue.

I normally don't review one chapter stories since I like to wait and see where things go, but I just wanted to drop a quick note and say that I liked the beginning of this. There are a few places where you use the name Jake (where I think you mean Mike), but overall I'm interested and looking forward to another chapter.