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for Shades of Grey

by purpleriho

person Dierdre
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wondered if you'd forgotten about this story. I was really enjoying it and hoped that in my abscence you'd written a bit more!
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Aside from the occasional skipped word, it is very well written. I am insanely curious about Frederick and will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
person miles
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story ! I like it so far !
It's sometime difficult to read but I like the characters...
Please, keep going ! I'm looking forward the next chapter. XD
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I usually only read yaoi on aff, but this one really caught my attention. I really like it, and would love to know what happens next. You left off at a intriguing part, and I'd like to get to know Fredrick more, too, and how their relationship will continue. Keep up the good work!
person aquamum
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm new to your story and I like it very much.
I love the question about losing her virginity and the pencil answer - that was awesome !!!!!!
LOL
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I really think I'm going to like this story. Your grammar is solid (thank God) and even though it's just the first chapter, you've set up the beginnings of the plot nicely. I can't wait for your next chapter!

~kitty