rate_review Reviews

Wow I reallt like this story, I'm not usually one for incest but you've managed to persuade me otherwise,lol. please update soon, I can wait to see what he's going to do next.
Amaria xx

This story is intriguing to say the least. Please continue...

Linda

Wow...Marcus is shameless. He's really tearing her down. I feel terrible for Kelly. She probably has terrible self-esteem issues. Marcus is being ridiculously cruel...Part of me wishes Kelly comes up with a kick as way to get revenge on him for being such an asshole. I guess his abuse of Kelly is a way for coping with his attraction to kelly?? Anyways, I can't wait to read where you go with this plot/characters...great story!

...Wow. What a real jackass.

I saw no spelling or grammatical errors, which is a plus.

Artistically, it's quite dark, and you really get a feel for how much of a conniving bastard Marcus is. I immediately felt sympathy for his twin sister.

Keep up the good work.

Great story so far!! Marcus is such an asshole!! I love it! Lol. Great start, can't wait to see where you take this!