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LOVE IT! I completely did not see the whole Kelly/Marcus on even playing grounds thing! I honestly thought you were just going to kill off one or both of them! The way you've written it is sooooo much better. I love that Kelly has realized that she has access to whatever Marcus does and I hope she uses it all to her advantage! Lol, hope to see Marcus getting some of his own medicine! This fic is so great and i hate incest of ANY kind! So my liking this story is really a tribute to your awesome writing/plot! Hope you update again soon! Lol, no long breaks like last time...!

Oh, I loved this chapter!! Kelly found her backbone and Marcus got a taste of his own medicine, YAY! Now he knows what it was like to be physically dominated and powerless. This is so good!

Linda

can't wait to see what happens next:)

Ahh! Finally an Update!! I love that Kelly still has that defiant streak in her! It really does knock Marcus down a peg or two. Great update!! Post more soon!

oh yay you updated I seriously thought he planned on killing jasmine

Hey! Great update! I love how frequently you update this story!! Lol, as much as I love domineering/possessive men...Marcus perhaps needs to feel what its like to NOT be in control for once. I hope we get to hear more from Kelly though. Perhaps what her reactions are towards marcus and his version of 'love'. Anyways, can't wait for the next update!!

Wow that was sick and twisted and I loved it! I hope you update soon.

This is very good

Marcus is such a bastard, isn't he? I don't know why (it seems like every chapter makes me cringe but I can't stop reading it anyway!)

I like this story.

Linda

Great stuff, and well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.