rate_review Reviews

Great Story. I look forward to updates.

This story is so wonderfully brilliant. I love it.
Marcus is so devious and twisted. Introducing this new character James is going to make things a lot more interesting.
I feel there is undertone to this chapter but I didn't really pick up on it.
Either way you're a phenomenal writer.

this is a beautiful story and i hope you continue writing it :D

Just wonderful. Please write on!

Hey!

I can't believe you updated this story!! I thought I was seeing things when I saw a chapter update! I love this story. I think its well written and really has a great plot. I love this new Kelly where she's found power and she's going to use it to make Marcus miserable...I can't wait to see what she comes up with! The sadist in me is rooting for Marcus to get his act together, realize the error in his ways and perhaps get to a better place with Kelly but I know that that might not happen. Basically, I'm saying that you can write whatever you want and I'll still keep reading this awesome story because I love the characters/plot. Great job. Hope to see more updates soon!!

please continue again

Hey!

Wow it's been a painfully looooong time since you continued with this fic! I hope you plan on finishing it because I am DYING to know how this will go for these two fantastic characters! You're really leaving us hanging with that last chapter! I really hope you continue with this and if you ever need a pep talk, lol, count me in!! YOu're an awesome writer who has written two deep and complicated characters that have all of these intriguing facets to their personality. Post more soon!!!

obscene...awesome. such a great twist in the last chap. she was always a bit defiant, but i never expected her to be strong or smart enough to try to play his game and use his desire against him. wonder, since it's his game and all, if he'll always hav to upper-hand and be calling the shots. mayb this bout of rebellion won't work out. hope it does though, it's better when the pain is mutual, not just an attacker and helpless victim. does she really realize her worth and beauty; and how much power she has over him? can't wait to find out; please update soon! <3

Slightly surprising turn of events, but I still deeply hope Marcus turns his sister into his own little slut in the end. I hope to see Marcus getting some retribution in the next chapter for what Kelly has started. I don't usually like the bad guy winning in most stories I read, but your story is my own little outlet for my more sick and twisted fantasies. I have enjoyed reading how Marucus was slowly bending and breaking his sister to his will and kinda missed that in this chapter. Good luck with future updates.

LOVE it. I can't stand fics where the female is utterly helpless. I keep tabs on this story quite a bit, I hope Kelly gets some serious revenge in the coming chapters :D

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