rate_review Reviews

Please continue writing. I just started this story, but I see it hasn't been updated in a good eight months. D; I really like it. If you need inspiration/ideas, I'm more than willing to offer them! I just want to hear the ennnd.

In many ways I "hate" this story because Marcus is such a detestable character, but that's what makws him the utterly perfect sadist. Self-assured. Narcissistic. Egocentric. It is truly what makes this story absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I love the idea, the detail, and the characters. Marcus is the perfect antagonist. The truest yang in the twin pair. Lovely.

You should consider doing another male/female twin story with a female top. It would be interesting as well with your writing style! Email anytime btw. luffy_sp@yahoo.com

If anything, Kelly was ballsy for mentioning the dead boyfriend. Yow! I wanted to applaud her. Wow, Marcus really is so fucking deluded, isn't he? I feel like the saddest and truest part of this fic is that money really does fix everything. It even covers up sociopathy. I am enjoying it though, despite my intense dislike for Marcus. If you didn't write him well, I wouldn't want to string him up by his balls. Lol. This is going on my Recommended Reading list. :)

I love how badass Kelly is getting. I wonder if knowing he killed Hayden will totally push her over the edge. I love Alyssa, by the way. She is like a human kitty. :)

THAT'S MY GIRL! Kelly you crazy bitch, I love you! She did great! Finally, Marcus understands how *she* felt all those years. I like how you gave them BOTH maso/sado tendencies and had them flow in and out of them as only twins can. It feels like everyone gets something. A little femdom for me this chappie! Yaaay! Lol.

Great story. Please continue! I wish AFF had an alert function so I knew when you updated!

Oh! Do, please continue! I absolutely love this story! And I'm dying to know what happened to Marcus!

muy buena pewro esta inconclusa, esperemos mas capituños. ana maria

Oh my god, Kelly is hot. I loved it when she said Hayden was better, and then when she started playing the game - hot hot hot. I love her. I hope she wins. Yet there's a part of me that wishes Marcus would force an orgasm out of her, but overall, I hope she beats him. I love her character so much. Mostly, I hope you drag the game out, but update frequently, because this is hot and amazing, and I haven't been this interested in what happened to the characters in a long time. I'm a sucker for power plays, and you really wrote the best one I've ever read. Thanks so much for this.

Needed to add that I also love Liana. You have some amazing, interesting characters in this story. I can't wait to see what happens to them.

Update soon. This is one of my fave fics. Do I sense that Kelly actually has feelings for him? Regardless, she seems almost broken, judging by their last time.

Whatever happens, i hope you do include a few sibling on sibling smut chapters, when he breaks her.