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This is such a fluffy story. I love it :-)

Very nice story. Good, likeable characters (except for that politician, and we weren't supposed to like him), and good story development. I stayed up WAY too late reading this. There were some typos, and a few awkward turns of phrase, but you used the word "lose" correctly instead of "loose" like everyone else seems to be doing lately, and I love you for that. ^_^

Wonderfull!!! Absoloutly wonderfull!!! One of the best storys I've ever read!!! You idea of creating a couple of a scinetist and an adroid is just super!! I really like how you showed their feelings and that in the end it is not important who or what your partner is as long as you love him!!! So emotionally and yet so hot with the very detailed sex!!! I really love this story and probably will read it many times!! Thank you for creating this fabulous story!!!!!

Wow!I've just read all of the eleven chapters and I must say that I'm impressed by depth of characters, your style,attention to details and above the all concept which I must say is in a way very scary. I mean all the talk about dismantling and deportation, about who really is human (apart from the fantasy idea)reminds me about Nazis and concentration camps;it must be because just recently I've had exam on WWII. Keep writing. I really want to see Koji and Shinta live happy ever after,for as long as they can.

You've constructed a very well written story. There were only a few issues I had with it.
First, was the fact that you have a tendency to repeat phrases, and one phrase in particular: "It wasn't long before..." appears in nearly every chapter, and in every chapter it's in, it repeats again. And Again. And Again. And AGAIN.
Changing it up would be nice, because it becomes a bit of a joke after a while, seeing it over and over.
Second problem ((and really the only other one)) was that the bio-android bit seemed to come quite out of left field. It's written okay, but I think you could have done a better job introducing it. Anyway, cheers.

Okay just found the story and it's great, like all your works. Interesting characters, a great plot that really pulls the reader in and leaves them wanting to read more, twists and turns in the story that leaves you wondering whats going to happen next, and a complete and total lack of reviews . . . what the heck is wrong with readers? My goodness people this author is really good, all the stuff of her's I read have all be wonderful stories with long chapters. I simply do not understand why you don't have reviews. It's the same for 'Dragon Boy'(?) and 'The Hawks' both great stories but where's the love for the readers? Well I for one love your stuff, you got some talent dear and I look forward to reading more from you on all your stories. Please don't loss heart for writing. And please readers give this author some positive feed back, this person deserves some review pay for all the hard work that has been put forth to give us good quality stories. Take care and thank you for all your hard work creating and posting these stories.

littleolmee
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Well this has been a very fun read. I was just reading over your stories and enjoying them immensely. Nice variety of tone and storyline to the whole lot. And of course, lovely sex and sweetness, too. I look forward to reading new chapters when you get them up!

oh wow!
I am in love with this story!
Y'know I had a feeling Shinta was a Bio-android!
Ugh he better be ok, I might cry if he's not.
Koji and Shinta are so cute together!
I like your writing style, I get the feeling of the characters
and the atmosphere through reading it!
Reike x

love dis story
i just finished watching absolute boyfriend and then i come across this...brilliant
update soon
caus koji is soo cute!!!