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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story I hope you continue it's a very good plot!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a pretty subtly sexy beginning. I sense greatness here- can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, and I can't wait for more. It was a good beginning, a damn good beginning and I liked the metaphor about the ocean towards the end I thought it fit in very well.
I can't wait.
I can't wait.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, this does have potential. I would love to see the next chapter.