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for Little Ray of Sunshine

by Camui

schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I think you have to be a genius.
I'm not normally fond of extremely feminine, long-haired 'j-rocker' type guys but Julian is utterly amazing. I think it's because his personality doesn't match the stereotype that I'm so drawn to this story. That and the sharp wit.

If I could have him narrate my life, I'd totally do it.
person Sae
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have extremely mixed feelings on Little Ray of Sunshine. On one hand, it was extremely well written, witty, and the sex was hot. On the other, Julian irritates me immensely with his superiority complex (not that anyone could really blame him, considering how weak everyone in his school seems to be). If you actually did write a full out story following him, I'd be more interested to see his interactions with a guy that honestly doesn't like him. Yes, Shaun put up some resistance, but not enough that I'd even really call this a 'rape' story so much as a dubcon. Not that I'm suggesting Julian actually rape someone, but I just kinda want to see him handle a guy that honest and truthfully recognizes that he abuses the power everyone seems to give him for little to no reason. Maybe that's just my take on it. Either way, keep writing! I really do like your work.
person nay
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"fangoriously digested by a gelatinous monster"

This caught my eye immediately and was the reason I read this story. I'd recognize a little Strongbad anywhere! teehee...

Anyways, love your humor and your writing. I think you really brought your characters to life, and though I detest the name Julian -(you know how it goes when you knew this one kid named Julian forever and a half ago who you couldn't stand the sight of and now you hate the name Julian...yeah)- I'll deal with it cause he was so darn loveablish, though maybe he needs to be knocked down a peg or two.

But uh yeah. No two people are not on fire. Aww.