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More please! I like this, yes I do!

aw poor Julian got thrown down from his throne, *pats* This still amuses me and well even if you don't have a plan I think it will turn out alright :P I usually have a plan, but my characters never want to stick to it, *sigh* how evil...

Okay so the school has a new king Jake, can't wait to see how he turns out and if Julian will try to topple him back. At least he has Shaun, I wonder will he treat the kid nicely, he should, he's nice :P

Anyway, hope you add more to this soon ;) (I always get over excited with smileys, *shrugs* smileys are fun. ^___^)

OMG I loved that twist! Didn't see it coming, did you see it coming? lol, it was fun... Shaun isn't so nice after all :( aw, ok, I can get over this because it was funny, and now... what is our little ray of sunshine going to do??? More sex? lol, keep it coming!

And yes, also want to compliment you on the speedy update, thanks :)

Chapter 4

Interesting twist!!! Shaun is behind it all?!!Wow!!!

you know, until now I wasn't quite sure what to make of this story, or whether or not to actually like Julian, but now.... I like Julian, and desperately want to see what he does to take revenge. I really like this story, and can't wait to see where this whole thing goes. Keep up the interesting work

CHapter 3 "My Batteries Died Some Time Ago"

The story may not be going anywhere but it highly readable and enjoyable!!!
That Julian got his just deserts so quick only makes it more interesting!!
So many obnoxious and sweet possibilites!!! Love that he is sad, yet so
unremoseful!!

Thanks,
R

Niice. pushed the king down his hill. And you don't know what'll happen next? Well, what do most kings do when their crown is usurped? Try gettin' it back o' course.

Although is sounds so much easier. Want some suggestions on where you might want to lead it? You did an awesome job bursting Jules ego, and Shaun makes a great shoulder to lean on, but eventually things recover and Jules learns a valuable lesson of dictatorship in school. Jake might find out that keeping the sheep from flocking around the irresistible social magnet called Julian would be harder than he thought. Maybe? Ah haha... I can imagine a bit of a high school war. Pranks to humiliate one another until things get carried away. Mix in family issues that could potentially explain Jake's personality, or Jules, and a reason for one or the other to be apologetic and you have yourself a some kind of ending... course I have no clue what the hell it is.

I think I really just like this story of yours because of Jules personality. It's not so much as mean as it is just inconsiderate. Heh. Well, whatever you have planned for the next chapter (and more) I hope it's good as the last ones.

This is really quite amusing, made me grin several times, I like the humour! And our evil little female looking Julian *smirks* Hm... sex scene was nice, Shaun DID want it, that dirty boy, hehe...

Okay in a hurry, I have just read chapter 1, will be back to read the second later, I want to see what happens to this egoistic boy :P

this is really quite hilarious. x3

Oh I love these obnoxious guys!!!!'
And Julian is a real pip!!!!
Lots of fun!!! Maybe his best friend will
need a BJ later on!!! HA!

Thanks,
R