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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No more chapters?! ._.
*is now an official fangirl of Camui after speeding through the available chapters of the story* <3
I love your writing o.o Fits the character perfectly, which is one of the better original characters I've ever seen.. Makes me want to make a fanart, if I only was able to picture the characters better 8D *got trouble remembering the descriptions* I'm surprised to find such a nice story on this site, but this is definitely added to my list of fictions to check for updates all the time. Going to attack your other stories after this review <3
As for the actual story, I find the turn of events interesting (thinking of the seduction of Julian *silly grin*). Can't wait till you update, which I don't know when is, since I don't know how often you update ._.
*is now an official fangirl of Camui after speeding through the available chapters of the story* <3
I love your writing o.o Fits the character perfectly, which is one of the better original characters I've ever seen.. Makes me want to make a fanart, if I only was able to picture the characters better 8D *got trouble remembering the descriptions* I'm surprised to find such a nice story on this site, but this is definitely added to my list of fictions to check for updates all the time. Going to attack your other stories after this review <3
As for the actual story, I find the turn of events interesting (thinking of the seduction of Julian *silly grin*). Can't wait till you update, which I don't know when is, since I don't know how often you update ._.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Got a problem with posting reviews lately, so you might get several ones. Little me is smart enough to copy her comments before posting though.. And saw that another author I like is reviewing your stories as well 8D (Kolgrim)
Continuing.. I love your writing o.o Fits the character perfectly, which is one of the better original characters I've ever seen.. Makes me want to make a fanart, if I only was able to picture the characters better 8D *got trouble remembering the descriptions* I'm surprised to find such a nice story on this site, but this is definitely added to my list of fictions to check for updates all the time. Going to attack your other stories after this review <3
As for the actual story, I find the turn of events interesting (thinking of the seduction of Julian *silly grin*). Can't wait till you update, which I don't know when is, since I don't know how often you update ._.
Continuing.. I love your writing o.o Fits the character perfectly, which is one of the better original characters I've ever seen.. Makes me want to make a fanart, if I only was able to picture the characters better 8D *got trouble remembering the descriptions* I'm surprised to find such a nice story on this site, but this is definitely added to my list of fictions to check for updates all the time. Going to attack your other stories after this review <3
As for the actual story, I find the turn of events interesting (thinking of the seduction of Julian *silly grin*). Can't wait till you update, which I don't know when is, since I don't know how often you update ._.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continuing.. As for the actual story, I find the turn of events interesting (thinking of the seduction of Julian *silly grin*). Can't wait till you update, which I don't know when is, since I don't know how often you update ._.
Sorry about this ^^"
Sorry about this ^^"
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello precious!
I finally came around to review this story of you! Do I hear cheers for me?! *grins*
To your story: Julian is maniac. Moody - Like a woman during her bloody days! Bi-polar - Definitely! Insane: Can you say understatement?! *laughs* Well, hopefully he'll find what he really wants. I have the feeling he won't be happy with his renewed reign - though I doubt he's searching for happiness.
Jake's a wimp. If it was my car, even if it was just a Pinto, I would have stop Julian or get killed in the process, fuck the baseball bat. Hell, after he smashed the first headlight, I'd start the engine and run him over! It's just like someone threatens to break my table tennis racket or so... *chuckles*
Well, we'll see what happens. I guess Julian wakes up in a prison - or mental health institute... Shaun has to get back to manual mode then. Jake'll become a regular school bus passenger. Colby (I love it when you write "Kohl-bee" - because Kohl is German for cabbage... *grins*) will have time to earn enough money to keep buying his clothes at Abercrombie's. You know, this fic actually makes me look what this Abercromby is all about - 30$ for a tee with ad of the company that sells it or 60$ for plain white swimming trunks; what the fuck?!
Anyway, I stop for now. Love this fic and love you!
Nathaniel
p.s.: Shouldn't baby carrots have carrots and babies as ingredients?! :D
I finally came around to review this story of you! Do I hear cheers for me?! *grins*
To your story: Julian is maniac. Moody - Like a woman during her bloody days! Bi-polar - Definitely! Insane: Can you say understatement?! *laughs* Well, hopefully he'll find what he really wants. I have the feeling he won't be happy with his renewed reign - though I doubt he's searching for happiness.
Jake's a wimp. If it was my car, even if it was just a Pinto, I would have stop Julian or get killed in the process, fuck the baseball bat. Hell, after he smashed the first headlight, I'd start the engine and run him over! It's just like someone threatens to break my table tennis racket or so... *chuckles*
Well, we'll see what happens. I guess Julian wakes up in a prison - or mental health institute... Shaun has to get back to manual mode then. Jake'll become a regular school bus passenger. Colby (I love it when you write "Kohl-bee" - because Kohl is German for cabbage... *grins*) will have time to earn enough money to keep buying his clothes at Abercrombie's. You know, this fic actually makes me look what this Abercromby is all about - 30$ for a tee with ad of the company that sells it or 60$ for plain white swimming trunks; what the fuck?!
Anyway, I stop for now. Love this fic and love you!
Nathaniel
p.s.: Shouldn't baby carrots have carrots and babies as ingredients?! :D
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really intersted in your writing style, which is what has kept me going, but I've come to an understanding that the only character I even remotely like is the Jake kid. I'm almost positive that I only even like him because I feel badly for him.
That's not to say the story isn't interesting, because it is. I just hate the majority of your characters ><.
Sorrysorry.
Anyway, keep up the work, it's really interesting :]
That's not to say the story isn't interesting, because it is. I just hate the majority of your characters ><.
Sorrysorry.
Anyway, keep up the work, it's really interesting :]
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, the chapter most definitely didn't suck! I loved it. Angry sex, revenge, yeah =D Soo Julian climbing his way on the top again, can't wait to see it!
I almost feel sorry for Shaun... But that was kind of creepy what he did... hm anyway, thanks for writing!
I almost feel sorry for Shaun... But that was kind of creepy what he did... hm anyway, thanks for writing!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well-fucking-done!!!!
I absolutely LOVE this story! Its so good I feel like fanarting it!
Really though, This is just freaking brilliant material, gotta love it.
Where the hell did you learn to write like that? You in school or have you left, cause you could seriously work with this talent!
Anyway, standing ovation from the girl called Jade,
Love you!
(and Julian, absolutely adore<3 his character, I'll be his minion anytime *wink*)
I absolutely LOVE this story! Its so good I feel like fanarting it!
Really though, This is just freaking brilliant material, gotta love it.
Where the hell did you learn to write like that? You in school or have you left, cause you could seriously work with this talent!
Anyway, standing ovation from the girl called Jade,
Love you!
(and Julian, absolutely adore<3 his character, I'll be his minion anytime *wink*)
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes. I love me some angry sex. Awesome.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha your commentary is hilarious. but no the chapter most certainly did not suck! i'm excited to see what julian has up his sleeve.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say i really like this story, very interesting character.
Can't wait for more. :)
Can't wait for more. :)