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for Little Ray of Sunshine

by Camui

person Tryster
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holey crap, I wasnt expecting 4-chan to show up there xD Awsome.
So, um, you gonna get Colby and Jules together? Please?? Here's hoping that's your plan!
person Hege
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.. 9 chapters.. nice *cough*

4chan?! *lol* Make some pictures to go with the next chapter (don't need to, would just be fun 8D)
Hmm.. I like where this story is going 8D Continue writing and have fun <3

And lol at the elder couple..
person Hege
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continuing: ... <3 I'll be waiting <3

And lol at the elder couple..
person Hege
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol?! Okey.. we just don't bother with the last part then :| The reviews didn't want my hearts ;w; <3
person Saminada
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do u hate this chapter so much??! O__o

I LOVED the kiss the shared (even tho it didn't last long!!! hihi I think it was so sweet! ^^
I wonder if something more will happen between them?? I really think they would make a cute couple! LOL
And I really don't know who u want to pair Julian with but anyways... We'll see I guess! :D

I can't wait to read more! Thanks alot for the update! *grins*
person Saminada
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do u hate this chapter so much??! O__o

I LOVED the kiss the shared (even tho it didn't last long!!! hihi I think it was so sweet! ^^
I wonder if something more will happen between them?? I really think they would make a cute couple! LOL
And I really don't know who u want to pair Julian with but anyways... We'll see I guess! :D

I can't wait to read more! Thanks alot for the update! *grins*
person nay
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I just notice this: "my batteries died some time ago"..."ugly people, put your hands down"

First Strongbad, now Family Force 5?!

That's it. Let's mate. Fangoriously. With lots of gelatinous babies.


person Kiira
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey your soo fast I can't keep up! lol, but yeah that's good, I just read chapter 6, decided to stop for a comment. Fried ice cream? o_0 I had to google it. haha, well, doesn’t that sound... er healthy? haha, ok interesting at least. Yeah I can't believe either, that I actually stopped to comment some random thing like fried ice cream =_=

Anyway, yay for Julian; he't the king again and good job on smashing the car, hehe, I should feel bad for Jake, though... kinda... should I? Because honestly... I don't =/ *mwuahaha*

and I read reviews other get; Hege; hih your nick made me laugh... it reminded me of hegepelle, a word that my sister came up with some years back and a word we have tried sooo persistently to get spreading here, and yes, hege works alone too, actually it's one of my favourite words now days *snickers* Which leads me to wonder; do I know you?? :)
person Hege
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU WANT PRAISE PERSONALLY? I'll give you personally :B
If you suddenly get a lot of psycho girls knocking on your internet windows, then it's your own fault 8) Who knows, I might be one of them..

As for the chapters.. just lol.. I'm sensing desperate measures from Julies side B) Me likes random basketballs and their effects at certain personalities.
person Hege
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAH.. To Kolgrim, I'm Hell... Kinda posted a bit on the forum thingie Laaerie had.. Haven't visited that one for a while...
Sorta a friend of Trix, and have stalked Laaerie and Teeta through her *shrugs*