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for Little Ray of Sunshine

by Camui

person Udyjay
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... Ohhh shiiiit. How could you, Shaun!!?
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, of so I spent half this story on the floor laughing. Julian is great. I especially loved the whole thing about Hollister and the cologne...hehehe. Please do a follow up or more chapters...or SOMETHING! keep up the good work!
XOXOXO, Niko
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DANECOOKROFL.

In case you're wondering I do keep my keyboard by my lips.
person AKI
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS U BUM

Q_Q u can't just end it. I loke your torry is original and very diferent
than all the ohter stories in here.

I love COlby and I was a little curious. Is the character of Colby inspired
by someone u know in RL?

<3
person TheSiner
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading I thought that this will be one of those stories. And it is! What 'those' stories I can't tell though. But also can't stop reading. I guess it's simply rubbing me the right way... eww... anyway, stop staring at your rewievs and go, write more of the fucking story!
Ow gawd! You have woken up the little, nasty, selfish ego-maniac in me!!!
person Kiira
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really are too fast for me to keep up, heh, not saying it's a bad thing; more for me to read in one go,

okay now I'm at chapter 9 though, or er I finished reading it, stopping by to review and continuing possibly at work when I'm bored and waiting for a customer. That's a bit dangerous though with your fic being this crazy, funny and... yeah, it might just happen that there comes a customer and in the middle of work I start snickering because of something in this story and I don't think the customers feel very secure in the hands of a hairdresser who snickers while doing their hair... 0_o ah well *shrugs* I know they still luv me.

Anyway, moving on...

So Colby is jealous? How cute, it is, nod and Jason? really straight? hmm... I doubt... heh I won't try to guess what happens; I'll just enjoy the ride.

'till next time then.
person Civako
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's like reading a manga when I read your story, Very nice. I liked chapter 11 where he seemed a lot more human...more likeable!! He's just hilarious!
person Nyroeon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck, J? How come I haven't seen this story yet?! D:< I just read through like.... all of it, lol. AND OMG TOKIO HOTEL. I seriously fangirl over Tom so much. +_+ Like, I almost feel creepy when I watch videos of them on youtube. :[ But then I realize that I have plenty of other hobbies besides fangirling over ubercute boys so it's okay!

Also, Julian and Colby should do it. ;D That's my favorite couple! All the others are like "mehhh" I also thought Julian and Jake would be hot.... *hmm~* That is unless there's a real-version of Jake who is loathesome...

Haha, so..... there's my review for you. 8D I'll see you on AIM~
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I accept your challenge, o-rival-with-eerily-similar-plot-cliches! Prepare to be verbally raped by my comical adolescent misadventures.

-Scorn!belittlement!degradinglaughterlawlz- You shall not defeat me! -disappears in a cloud of haughtiness-
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what you need to do...you need to make this into an anime...I would LOVE to watch this!!! Mmmmm...I love this story soooo much and now...I gotta read your others. GO JULIAN! and...GO CAMUI! And you know what...here is a cookie for your work!