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for Little Ray of Sunshine

by Camui

person Black Sharne
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha c'était trooooop bieeeen \o/

Par contre ça me fait très bizarre de lire une française qui écrit en anglais. Je sais pas trop pourquoi. Mais c'est bizarre.

En tout cas, j'ai bien ri, hoho. Hum.

Julian est trop kewl. Vraiment, vraiment. (fangirl power) J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

Hm, bye, je vais lire les autres histoires pour la peine. :)
person Udyjay
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DASNFHJOIAKSMD! AAAAAAWWWW! My heart sank so deep when Colby got sad... aww, poor baby. XD I love that kid!

LMFAO, why do you make me lol so hard? XD I adore your writing skills. Whatever Julian's reaction in his head is what I'd think. Amazing.

o: !! They keesed! I must reada more, now!
person Udyjay
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOOOO SHIT, DOOD. His day at Hollister was funny. At the end, though... sucks for Jason, man. xD ()


ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU
person Udyjay
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NUIDSOJFLKMNASDHUFJOIOIAOSIDIHG9JFOI!!1 Julian and Colby are PERFECT FOR EACHOTHER. I DON'T CARE WHAT COLBY SAYS THAT HE'S STRAIGHT. OKAY, FINE, HE CAN BE STRAIGHT. BUT HE'S TOTALLY GAY FOR JULES. FUCKFUCKFUICKUFIKUFICKNASHDFJSDIFKSFGRRR.


I LOL'D AT THOSE FAGGOT MIDDLE SCHOOLERS WHO BOTHERED COLBY AND JULES. THEY CAN SUCK THE FATTEST PART OF MY ASS.


I think I have one more chapter to go. THERE SHOULD BE SEX
person Udyjay
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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OH MY GOD. IT WAS SO PERFECT. SO DELICIOUSLY HILARIOUS AND HOT. BUT--! YOU DIDN'T..! WHY!?! YOU... AUUGH!


I WANT MOARRR. YOU FUCKING AMAZING GODLY PERSON.


I LOVE YOU SO HARD D:

WHEN YOU CLAIMED THAT YOU FINISHED THIS, I LITERALLY TOOK MY COMPUTER SCREEN AND SHOOK IT VIOLENTLY, SCREAMING "NO! NO NOO!! " SERIOUSLY. I WENT INSANE.

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schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Forget about any knights in shining armour, all of us should be waiting for our very own Colby's. :D
He's so precious!

This whole story was precious, actually. In fact, it just wouldn't be the same without your ramblings at the beginning and end. You're totally hilarious! And Jules is completely witty - I love that!

And I'm sososo happy to see you continuing! Seeing their relationship progress is going to be fun. ;D

Also, the vomitation on the sweater is actually fate trying to tell Julian he's not supposed to wear clothes when going to see Colby. :D
That's what they told me anyway!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You made me sad when you said it was complete...honestly...I teared up...on the inside? Eh...shouldn't hurt a fanboy. So glad its back. I ♥ this story!!! And awesome that this will be a manga! Can't wait for that! I wanna read more of this story NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So. I come home, find your story, get painfully and obsessively into it, click through the chapters robotically...

When I reach:

"My mom thought that 'emo' was a type of bird."

Now, there's a hell of a lot of random thoughts dispersed within your work - and it's always funny + adds charm to your writing - but that one line disconnected me from my apt reading of your story because I just found it so ridiculously funny.

I'm going to go back to reading now though, and give you a proper review when I'm finished.
Unless you manage to shock me out of my concentration with another irresistible line. :)
person Udyjay
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!!! X)) YAY! He's back on top! That was so awesome. I love Julian! XDDD -reads next chapter-
person Udyjay
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness, I absolutely love this. XD Julian is so hilarious, seriously. I love it so hard.


Aww, Jake! This is going to be interesting. X3