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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter...I can't wait to see what happens next. I have to admit, I did expect a little more emotion from Marina in this chapter after all her child was just kidnapped.
Please update soon, I love this story!
Please update soon, I love this story!
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw i hope they don't hurt the baby!!!!
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fear for her right now. I want her to be happy but it's the "what's to come" that scares me.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow Marina is pregnant! I love how you write the progression of their relationship, it's slow and realistic. I mean it's obvious that Marsaren cares a a great deal about Marina, but he shows it through his eyes and actions and not necessarily his words which suits his character.
I can't wait to read the chapter when she gives birth! And officially becomes his wife!
I can't wait to read the chapter when she gives birth! And officially becomes his wife!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful. truly. marsen was so gentle with her and I would feel safe too if I was her. You can just tell he is going to protect her and their child with his life. Wonderful chapter.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn't see that coming. great chapter.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting. I can't wait to learn more about Marina and if she has any powers.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neat story! You write very well. I really enjoy the characters, and the plot is quite interesting. Keep it up, you're great!!
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write your story the way you want to. If people don't like it then they shouldn't read it. If your story calls for a "rape" THEN WRITE IT. updates SOON.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please