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by luna65

person Peleia
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok! So, I'm getting off my butt and going back to do some reviews I was too lazy to do before.. and definately wanted to get to some of your fics because I think it's a crime that people aren't reviewing you more. :)

I found this one very erotic. The tension is great, and the piercing arousing and unexpected. I did get a little confused while he was with Saffron, though; I found it a bit hard to follow the two women (there were two, right?) and who was who, doing what and when.

But other than that, a great read.