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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm Impressed
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really beautiful. Vivid, sexy, very well crafted. There were a couple of spots where the wording was just a little bit abstract... where I didn't feel like I quite got what you were trying to say. But that was the exception! It was hot and rich and I'll enjoy reading it a couple of times. :)