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for Swelter

by Peleia

person ree
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is beautifully written! i would hope that your other work will be as great as this one was!
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..that was amazing...
person GlenGirl
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Very descriptive and well written.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent piece of storytelling! I hope to read more of your work soon--this story was wonderful! So full of description, one could almost feel the stifling heat and humidity that pervades the entire chapter. Your imagery was superb. All my senses were at work as I read this story: Taste, smell, sight. Everything. I felt like I was right in the story.

Linda