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for The Sacrifices for Peace

by winterbourne

schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really liking this story soooo much, need more. don't stop now.
person lovelyl
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please
person leftat11
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first and second chapter, it looks promasing. I hope there are more details on the world it is in. Lovely tender love secne as well.
person szellman
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and the characters. can't wait to read more and to see what happens next. :)
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg im so sorry about your computer! I know how much that sucks....:( its like your life disappears lol. i really like this story, i think your characters started out a little flat but they are gaining depth with the chapters :D looking forward to an update!
person Mohammad Ali
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this one..very well written and just great to read;)
person Rammina
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Winters Scorn,

I love your story. It's well written and vividly detailed. I ,however, must comment on your lack of correct grammar usage and spelling mistakes. Please don't get discouraged though. Keep writting. I suggest that you find a beta reader. Other than that, you're a wonderful writer! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! ^_^
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
person Eastwind256
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I confess I have been following this story for a while now without reviewing (no cookie for me) but I though I should tell you that I'm really enjoying it. You've taken a well used concept and turned it into a very interesting story with characters that feel real. Thanks for the update
person ally
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!! *gasps* noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo damn it.